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HI! I'm Xia. I'm a native Chinese, studying English and German at Sun Yet-sen University. I want to improve my English writing skills BADLY!! , and hope you guys can help me.;D I'm planing going abroad for further study. If you want to learn Mandarin, I can be your language partner.
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    Ordinary people can achieve success through their parents' guidelines and their own hard working

    Today, many countries have elite universities for students all over the world, but the students who get admissions from those universities are not necessary geniuses. There are, indeed, students who are talented at certain things such as dancing or painting. However Excellence can also be achieved by those who are not.
    From the age of industrial revolution, a large number of geniuses have sprung up. Their incredible
    High IQs are due to two reasons. Firstly, as the living standards have been largely improved, children nourishing become good enough to foster a child with high intelligence. Secondly, scientific research has proved that people’s genes change in an advantaged way sometimes which makes them genius in some areas. Such as Einstein, he was proved born with talent and he did make a huge leap in human scientific history.
    However there are several ways for ordinary people to be proficient in areas where talented people make achievements. The most common way is hard working. Practice makes perfect. If people devote themselves into what they pursue, they probably succeed in those areas. For instance, Chinese table tennis player Deng Yaping was not so well at this sport, but she practiced hard instead of sitting before the TV like most of her peers did. Then she became a world Ping-pong Champion. Also, parental instructions are essential to lead to children’s good performance in certain subject. For example, Children who get inspiration and encouragement from their parents are more successful in things that they are specified in than those whose parents pay little attention on them. While children who without surveillance may even tend to be involved in anti-social activities and end up doing nothing.
    Overall, I believe that although there are lucky intelligent people who are born with talents and they often contribute greatly in areas they are in, their peers who are not that intelligent can also achieve great success though their parents’ guidelines and their own consistent hard-working.

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    November 24, 2013
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    Ordinary people can achieve success through their parents' guidelines and their own hard working Today, many countries have elite universities for students all over the world, but the students who get admissions from those universities are not necessary geniuses. There are, indeed, students who are talented at certain things such as dancing or painting. However Excellence can also be achieved by those who are not. From the age of industrial revolution, a large number of geniuses have sprung up. Their incredible High IQs are due to two reasons. Firstly, as the living standards have been largely improved, children nourishing become good enough to foster a child with high intelligence. Secondly, scientific research has proved that people’s genes change in an advantaged way sometimes which makes them genius in some areas. Such as Einstein, he was proved born with talent and he did make a huge leap in human scientific history. However it is possible for ordinary people to be proficient in areas where talented people make achievements through several ways. The most common way is hard working. Practice makes perfect. If people devote themselves into what they pursue, they probably succeed in those areas. For instance, Chinese table tennis player Deng Yaping was not so well at this sport, but she practiced hard instead of sitting before the TV like most of her peers did. Then she became a world Ping-pong Champion. Also, parental instructions are essential to lead to children’s good performance in certain subject. For example, Children who get inspiration and encouragement from their parents are more successful in things that they are specified in than those whose parents pay little attention on them. While children who without surveillance may even tend to be involved in anti-social activities and end up doing nothing. Overall, I believe that although there are lucky intelligent people who are born with talents and they often contribute greatly in areas they are in, their peers who are not that intelligent can also achieve great success though their parents’ guidelines and their own consistent hard-working.
    November 24, 2013
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    Curiously enough, one cannot read a book: one can only reread it. Also in "good readers and good writers", why "curiously enough" ? How to understand this sentence?
    May 21, 2013
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    In "good readers and good writers" by Vladimir Nabokov Why author emphasizes that we should read using our spine? "The mind, the brain, the top of the tingling spine, is, or should be, the only instrument used upon a book. " " In order to bask in that magic a wise reader reads the book of genius not with his heart, not so much with his brain, but with his spine." How to understand these two sentences and the "spine"? 谢啦!!☆⌒(*^-゜)v
    May 20, 2013
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    in "Good Readers and Good Writers" There is a sentence" There is nothing wrong about the moonshine of generalization when it comes after the sunny trifles of the book have been lovingly collected." How to understand the "moonshine" n "sunny trifles"
    May 20, 2013
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    What does the "refrain" means? in the lyric of "hey jude,refrain"what does the "refrain" exactly means?
    July 30, 2012
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    a cork-lined retreat in his wealthy home.What does "a cork-lined retreat "mean?
    June 20, 2012
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    Thank you ~!
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    April 16, 2012
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    It was ________we had hoped.A more a success than B. a success more thanC.as much of a success than Which one is right and why it is ? thank you for your answer.^_^
    April 16, 2012
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    The Minister of Finance is believed_____of imposing new taxes to raise extra revenue. A.that he is thinking B to be thinking C.that he is to think D to think How to fill in the blank? Why ?
    April 16, 2012
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