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I had forgotten!
I had forgotten to write my journal for two days.
I was very, very sleepy.
On Saturday, I went to the stadium to cheer up the Ehime university baseball team.
I played the trombone hardly. [Did you play the trombone a lot? "I played the trombone hard." or did you not play very much? "I hardly played the trombone."]
Though we lost the game, I think I won the support of xxx {you need to clarify this: whose support was won?}. I had a great time.My remarks:
I turned your last sentence from the past perfect [we HAD lost the game] to a simple past/preterite, because a past perfect tense always requires an older action in reference. So the introductory sentence [I had forgotten to write my journal] indicates to your readers that the story takes place AFTER those two days of no journal writing.
0 votedMay 28, 20171- J'ai oublie toutes mes mots en francais... Bonjour, je voudrais parler francais, mais il y a plus des 30 annees depuis j'apprendrais cette langage jolie. Aidez-moi, s'il vous plaits! Schrecklich, nicht? Ich moechte sagen: ich moechte gerne Franzoesisch sprechen, aber es ist mehr als 30 Jahre her, dass ich diese schoene Sprache gelernt habe. Terrible butchery of French, right? I want to say: I would like to speak French, but it has been more than 30 years since I spoke this beautiful language.November 19, 201430
Ein Email auf Deutsch - habe ich alles richtig geschrieben?
Hallo, wie geht's? Ja, ich kann auch ein bisschen Deutsch. Eigentlich lernte ich Deutsch in der Schule, bis zum Abitur, aber danach vergass ich viel. Zur Zeit will ich aber mein Deutsch üben und verbessern.
Es wäre wunderbar, wenn du mir mit meinem Portugiesisch helfen könntest, und ich kann auch natürlich mit deinem Englisch helfen. Auf Portugiesisch, Deutsch und Englisch können wir uns vielleicht miteinander “dreisprachig” unterhalten!
Wirst du dieses Wochenende Zeit haben, auf Skype zu sprechen?
Mark :-)0 votedNovember 19, 20141- "facing off" is a clever way to say "to be or come in competition, to fight against." It's clever here because the actual phrase "to face off" coincides with people making ugly faces. Haha!' A "mug" is portrait of a person. The word "mugshot" is used to describe a police photo of a suspect who has been arrested. The word "mean" refers to "looking aggressive." Scores of: many in part: partially (not all the way, not entirely) Millions in damages are being sought: this means that the lawyers for this company (Kinder Morgan) want to have a trial where the protesters would be condemned to pay millions of dollars in penalties for hindering the work of the company. A meme poking fun: a meme is an image that people use on the internet to make a funny statement. Memes can be drawings or pictures of normal persons or animals. Usually, people go to a website where they can enter a funny sentence, as if the person or animal in the meme picture said that sentence. "to poke fun" means to laugh about another person. You can poke fun and the other person can laugh with you or you can poke fun and hurt the other person. "at the assertion": an assertion is a statement. The lawyer for the company Kinder Morgan made the assertion that the company's workers could not do their work because people were looking at them with funny faces. This is very silly to say. It is even sillier that the company now wants millions of dollars from all the people making funny faces. The memes make fun of the lawyer and the company for wanting money like that. "constitute assault": this is part of the sentence "[The] BC. Supreme Court head last week [said] that facial expressions constitute assault." A high court in Canada said that making funny faces is the same as {constitutes} being aggressive {assault}. I hope this helps!0 votedNovember 19, 20142
JOB - FOREIGN COMPANIES OR STATE OWNED ONES
To decide on a suitable profession after graduating is always difficult for any individual. As a matter of fact, nowadays most graduates are more likely to work in foreign companies instead of state owned ones. The reasons vary from person to person depending on their goals but I believe that the crucial gaps between a foreign company job and a state owned one are exactly the salary and environment. Therefore, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this choice to clarify the motives.
First of all, graduates look for a job in foreign organizations due to its benefits.When we work for foreigners, they always (I would avoid words such as "always", "never", "totally", "all", etc) pay attention to the effects (?) we bring to their company rather than our relations (? do you mean connections?) or experiences. As a result, the salary rate mostly depends on one’s own [take out the word "own"] abilities. Therefore, the salary is equal (?) and justified . Another great advantage is the adaptive environment. In foreign companies, we often can be creative outside of strict regulations about time or workplace, whereas a state company will insist that the job duties are carried out timely and correctly. For example, we can work at home or a coffee shop without going to work in an office. Consequently, the job conditions in a foreign company are much more flexible than the ones we encounter when we work for government.
Besides those great advantages, a foreign company job can also have its own difficulties. Instead of paying a high salary, some foreign companies exploit their employees’ abilities so that they can gain the best profit without paying attention to the health care and safety of their employees. In addition, competition is frequently stronger and more severe. Not only must we outdo rivals to gain contracts for our company but we may also have to compete with other colleagues who might be more talented so that we can keep our position, which will cause a lot of stress and strain that is not good for our health in comparison with an easier and more comfortable job when we work for a state owned one. A good example of this are diseases like headaches and dizziness that can plague company officers.
In conclusion, the difference in benefits makes for difficult choiosing when graduates consider a job in a foreign company or a state owned one. There is, however, a growing tendency that more and more people choose to work with foreigners instead. I personally believe that the advantages of foreign company jobs outweigh their disadvantages because they can create a more liberal and creative society for everybody. [the last thought is not logical: no job can create a better society.] :-)0 votedNovember 19, 20141“Gabrielle”: Der Film
<a class="smarterwiki-linkify" href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gZQ-m9chJBo">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gZQ-m9chJBo</a>
Ich bin vor kurzem mit einer Freundin ins Kino gegangen um den Film Gabrielle zu sehen. Wir beide mochten ihn shr. Gabrielle ist ein 2013 preisgekröntes, kanadisches Drama von der Regisseurin Louise Archambault.
Gabrielle, die Schauspielerin in der Hauptrolle, spielt sich selbst, eine junge geistig behinderte Frau, die in einer betreuten Wohngemeinschaft in Montréal wohnt. Die Mitbewohner sind alle Mitglied eines Chores namens "Les Muses de Montréal". Sie bereiten eine Veranstaltung vor, wo sie den berühmten Quebecer Sänger Robert Charlebois in einem Konzert begleiten sollen. Gabrielle und Martin, auch ein Mitglied im Chor, verlieben sich ineinander, aber es ist in ihrer Situation nicht leicht, ihre Liebe zu erleben.
Martins Mutter kann nicht akzeptieren, dass Gabrielle und Martin ihre Liebe ausleben und ein echtes Paar werden. Gabrielle würde mehr als alles unabhängig sein, und in ihrer eigenen Wohnung mit Martin leben, was nicht wirklich realistisch ist. Ihre innigst geliebte Schwester Sophie ermutigt sie, aber sie muss ihr auch ihre bevorstehende Reise nach Indien verkünden.
Gabrielle ist ein glaubwürdiger Film, voll von schöner Musik, mit sympathischen Figuren und einer glaubwurdigen Attraktion zwischen den Hauptfiguren (Gabrielle und Martin). Es ist toll einen Film zu sehen über das Leben und die Schwierigkeiten von Menschen, die man oft in unserer Gesellschaft vergisst.0 votedNovember 19, 20144
