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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    你好。我叫爱丽丝,我的中国名字是王熙蕾。我在利兹大学学习中文。今年八月我要去台湾。我会在台北学习中文八个月。我喜欢画画,烹饪,玩电脑游戏。

     

    画画中的第一个画是动词!第二个画是名词,如果只用一个的话就会让人理解成你喜欢绘画作品

    你最后一句用了并列的结构,三个都应该要是动词,而你最后一个用了名词!所以在前面加个动词更好。

    中文不错哈!继续加油

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am an 19-year-old boy,i study in shenzhen university and i am very interested in english.i worry about my poor oral english.so i want to have someone to talk so that i can improve my english.the english culture hvea keot me spellbind.i also want to know more about english culture.as for me, i like playing badminton and drawing.i want someone to be my friend.
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