It looks like they both say the same thing to me... It's the spirit that makes a body healthy. And I fully agree... What's inside the heart and mind eventually finds it's way out through the body. From kindness to cruelty to love and murder. These all start within the spirit, but manifest through the body... Unhealthy emotions such as stress weaken the body, but laughter strengthens it.

一堂不愉快的课

有一个学生向我预定了一堂中文课，他说需要准备HSK-2。我根据他的学习目标提前进行了备课。我早早起床按时上线，而学生并没有来上课。我不得不发信息问他为什么没来上课，也不提前通知我，这样会浪费掉我的时间。大约迟到了45分钟后，他上线了，并且说他忘记了上课，没有任何道歉，还把我从Skype名单中删除，说以后再也不会上我的课(我同样也不需要这样的学生。迟到可以原谅，但这样我Hold不住)。他说我这样问是在insult him，虽然在课后评价中说了第一个sorry，但我想只是给自己找借口，因为他在sorry后面说至少在Italki上面有5次课迟到，因为他是个商人，别的老师都等他，并且没有像我这样问，还给我评了4.9分。
我已经在Itaki给学生上了15节课，每个学生都是给我评5分，我真的很介意这个4.9，他没有上我的课，凭什么给我评4.9呢。而且一个商人如果做不到守时，又怎么能做好生意呢？难道只有他忙，别人都很闲吗？太过分了！

There is a student who booked a lesson of mine and told me that he wanted to prepare for his HSK-2 test. So I prepared for his lesson yesterday according to his learning goal. I get got up early and to be online on time this morning, but he wasn't didn't be online on time. I had to send him a message to ask him why he didn't have make the lesson on time, and why didn't couldn't he just tell me in advance? This will was a waste of my time. About 45 minutes later he was online. He said he forgot about the lesson without any truly feeling sorry, and he also deleted me from his friend list of on Skype and said he won't wouldn't book any more lessons of mine.（I also don't need students like him! I can forgive him for being late, but I can't continue to be put on hold like this). He also said what I asked him is was an insult! Even though he said the first sorry in the evaluation, but I think it is was only the an excuse, because after the he said sorry, he said that he is a businessman and very busy. He's had five late lessons on italki at least already! The other teachers didn't ask him and to also wait for him them! So he give gave me a 4.9 score.
I'm so sad for about this 4.9 score. I work hard and to prepare every lesson in advance so that every student can learn mandarin effectively in my class. I have had take given 15 lessons on italki, and all the other students have given me a 5.0 score. He didn't even listen my lesson! Why did he can give me 4.9? Is n't he the only busy man leaving all others are all carefree?

 

1)The blue is just me adding letters and words to make it sound more fluent.

2)I used mostly past tense vocabulary because the context was in the past.

3)You did a great job! Your score is back to 5.0 :)

4)An exclamation mark (!) stresses a strong point or emotion (like yelling or crying) in written form.

5.0) 加油

I want to decorate my bedroom

I want to decorate my bedroom. I love the sea because it makes me feel free, easy and happy. so I also like the blue color. I want to painted my wall blue or green. Green can gives me a quiet and peaceful feeling. I plan to buy some flowers which can to lift my mood. I also love dolls. I'm will going to buy a few plush toys online. I hope my bedroom becomes beautiful.

 

This entry is more correct than my other entry.

I typed the other entry way too quickly :P

Tip: We always leave a space after a comma {,} or preoid {.} in English. 加油

 

 

 

 

I want to decorate my bedroom

I want to decorate my bedroom. I love the sea, it makes me feel free, easy and happy. I also like the blue color. I want to paint my wall blue or green. Green can gives me a quiet and peaceful feeling. I plan to buy some flowers which can lift up my mood. I also love dolls, I will buy a few plush toys online. I hope my bedroom becomes beautiful.

 

Very good! Add oil :)

This is a really cool saying!

 

Removing the word {that} would be how I'd say it as a Canadian.

(And we use a period {.} to end the statement.

 

Do you understand the feeling of missing someone? It is just like you will spend a long hard time to turn the ice-cold water you have drunk into tears.

 

(You can also experiment with other English words find another English flavor).

 

Do you understood the feeling of missing someone? I've been waiting a long hard time drinking iced water to fuel my tears :(...

 

PS: I think I double posted. My other post got squished together, haha!