请帮我改修一些句子

大家好 ! 我今天还写了一些句子不过我不知道那些行不行, 请帮我改修它们. 谢谢 !

1  他很喜欢唱歌，可是他唱来唱去都不好听。
2 我的家有几只金鱼，我儿子一直喂它们来。
3我需要做决定当法官还是经理，可是我觉得这两个专业都不错。
4 我找来找去，还是这家餐厅的饭菜又便宜又好吃。

5 你不认识我了吗 ？ 我是你的小学同学啊  !
我当然认识你 ！我看到你一下子想起了小学的时候。

6 我们现在出发，应该没问题吧 ？
 火车站不远，还来得及。

7 王老师生病往院了吗？
对，他昨天在教课时突然晕了，他病的不轻 ！

8 同学，我想去图书馆，你知道该怎么走吗 ？
你该先往北走五十米，然后到警察局后往左拐。

请帮我改修一些句子

大家好 ! 我今天还写了一些句子不过我不知道那些行不行, 请帮我改修它们. 谢谢 !

1  他很喜欢唱歌，可是他唱来唱去都不好听。
2 我的家有几只金鱼，我儿子一直喂它们。
3我需要做决定当法官还是经理，但是我觉得这两个专业都不错。
4 我找来找去，还是这家餐厅的饭菜又便宜又好吃。

5 你不认识我了吗 ？ 我是你的小学同学啊  !
我当然认识你 ！我看到你一下子想起了小学的时候 。

6 我们现在出发，应该没问题吧 ？
 火车站太远，还来得及吗？

7 听说王l老师生病往院了
对，他明天在教课时突然晕了，他的病可不轻 ！

8 同学，我想去图书馆，你知道该怎么走吗 ？
你该先往北走五分钟然后到警察局后往左拐

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was graduated from university.When i look for work,i found English is very important.I can read English files,but i couldn't say.It may be i fear to say English.So i was desire to learn speaking English.I was looking foward to speaking English flunently in someday.And i could have a wonderful work.By the way,i like to study English.And I can teach chinese.Someone want to learn chinese can add me.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was graduated from university.When i look for work,i found English is very important.I can read English files,but i couldn't say.It may be i fear to say English.So i was desire to learn speaking English.I was looking foward to speaking English flunently in someday.And i could have a wonderful work.By the way,i like to study English.I was looking for someone that can teach me  speak English or conversation with me by English.