Search from various English teachers...
Profile
I am a senior student in OingDao, China majoring in English. I am crazy about culture and people in English speaking countries! Be my friends if you wanna learn Chinese! I bet we may help each other a lot~
Learning
English
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin)Native
Lesson Feedback
Lesson history
 Last monthLast 3 monthsAll time
Completed lessons000
Attendance rate100%100%100%
Teacher reviews
No record
Activities
  • Corrected

    星期五

    今天是星期五!我最喜欢星期五(add a comma)因为明天我没有工作. (change into 。)有的人问我如果我可以星期六工作(改为星期六是否可以工作). 我告诉他们"我不可以!" (add full stop)我喜欢我的空- (可改为：我喜欢我有空余时间）我要很多时间, 我不需要很多钱! 可是如果我没有工作我想我(加：会)觉得很无聊. 有一点点工作很好,没有工作不好!你向(改为想）我对了吗?

     

    A brilliant writing! You can express yourself clearly and make us easily understood. Come on, you will find Chinese is really interesting!

     

    0 voted
    November 5, 2013
    1
  • Corrected

    大家好！

    大家好！这是第一次我用iTalki，所以我想自己介绍一下（改为介绍一下自己）。我叫马开兰，是美国人，有（去掉有）24岁。我在北京坐（改为做）一个实习，也学中文。我很喜欢住在北京，但是有一些缺点，比如说，我不喜欢那么多污染！我也觉得（在外国该在这儿）很难较*改为交）新朋友在外国，有时是因为我的中文说得不太好，有时是因为别人的英文说得不好。我也有点儿害羞，所以我害怕跟不认识的人说一下。

    请大家告诉我我写得错不错。 谢谢！

    马开兰

     

    Well done...You have express your feeling in a proper way and use some conjunction correctly. One thing you need to pay attention to is that there are some differences between Chinese and English. We usually place phrase like"在外国“ in the middle of the sentence, but in English it is oppesed. 

    For example

    我喜欢在家看电视。

    I like watching TV at home.

    Come on. You will make great progress.

     

    0 voted
    November 1, 2013
    1
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    November 1, 2013
    0
  • Posted
    Plan for job As senior students, finding a decent job has become a hot topic between us. Which prefession will we choose or which position will we have is definitely what bother us mostly. An for me, a English major student, it seems we have no major due to English has been a tool to commucate. However, I love it very much and I' d like to make it my profession. Regardless of prejudice, I will stick to improve my English and find a job about it woth full confidence!
    October 30, 2013
    4
    0
  • Corrected

    Plan for job

    As senior students, finding a decent job has become a hot topic between us. Which prefession will we choose or which position will we have is definitely what bother us mostly. As for me, a English major student, it seems we have no major due to English has been a tool to commucate. However, I love it very much and I' d like to make it my profession. Regardless of prejudice, I will stick to improve my English and find a job about it woth full confidence!

    0 voted
    October 30, 2013
    0