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Driving
The time is 10:40p.m.
I've been busy these days... I'm stressfuled------!! εε=ヽ( `Д´)ノWaaahhh!
So I had a drive in the city last night.
I take delight listening to in music in my car.
My favorite singers isare Nelly,_Keri Hilson,_Jay Sean,_LMFAO,_Chris Browmn,
and James Blunt.My favorite singers are Nelly, Keri Hilson, Jay Sean, LMFAO, Chris Brown and James Blunt.
I especially like to "High" of James Blunt's song "High".I especially like James Blunt's song "High".
I listened to this song at live, last summer.I listened to this song live last summer.
And I cried out of my eyes, with in emotion!And I cried out in emotion!
The song is really soothing♪
Well.._I went to home after hanging around the city.
And then I took a photo of Kyoto tower.
Kyoto tower is kKyoto's symbleol.Kyoto tower is Kyoto's symbol.
btw.._The tower was modelled onafter a candle.btw.. The tower was modelled after a candle.
The story is well-knowns as in Kyoto.
What did this look like to you?
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0 votedMarch 11, 20120- Today~ 오늘, 건하루있어요. Today was a long day. 대학교에서 일본어하고한국어하고인도네시아어수업이있었어요. I had Japanese, Korean and Indonesian class. 나 피곤해요!~ I'm tired!~ 근데, 오늘이건하루이지만, 재미있었어요! But, though today was a long day, it was fun! 또한, 오늘은새로운취업을받았어요. Also, I received a new job today. 시당이고, 시당의이름이'Brod Burger'이에요. It's a restaurant and the name of the restaurant is Brod Burger. 아주맛있하고싼버거를사요. They sell really delicious and cheap burgers. 애들은버거를촣아해요? Does everyone like burgers? 버거를안좋아하명, 뭐를 좋아해요? If you don't like burgers, what do you like?
March 5, 201231 Working Holiday from Japan.
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Thank you,iheartwaku!Thank you,_iheartwaku!
Well, The time is 11 p.m.in Japan.Well, the time is 11 p.m._in Japan.
(花文字はいりません。 そして、区切りについてですが、英語に区切りの後でスペースをします。気をつけてね~ :))
I go to Osaka,today.I went to Osaka_today.
(goは過去形になりました。そして、区切りはいりません。)
I learned about Working Holiday.
I said ,``I want to go to Canada! How much!?``I said, "I want to go to Canada! How much would it cost?!"
(How muchは大丈夫ですが、would it costをつけ付けくわえったらもっと当然になります。)
there`s answerd "C$10,000~C$15,000."(The exchange rate is disregard.)
They answered, "$10,000 - $15,000." (The exchange rate was disregarded.)(there’sはthereとisと一緒の言葉で物があっちにあるを意味している。だから、人だったら、theyを使います。そして is disregardは過去形になりました。)
OH...( ゚д゚)oh my god...!?
”I never give up anything for my own life!”"I will never give up anything in my life!" I thought.
(この文を当然にしました。)
But...I wasted a lot of money this month. (´;ω;`)
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iheartwaku、ありがとう!
さて、只今日本は午後11時です。
今日は大阪に行ってきました。
ワーキングホリデーについて学んできました。
「カナダに行きたい!いくらかかるの!?」と言ったら、
彼らは「100万円~150万円」と答えた。(為替レートは無視)
おぉ...( ゚д゚)ポカーン...!?
[自分の人生、諦めてなるものか!]
でも...今月たくさん無駄づかいしちゃったんだよなー (´;ω;`)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I'm glad to help! :))
Like before, I placed the correction underneath the original sentence. So compare and take note of the differences.
Apart from that, seems like it was an exciting day!! You're getting closer to your goal!! :D
Also if you have any questions, just ask. :D
手伝ってよかったです。
前の答えと同様、正解的な文は原文の下にあります。だから、二つの文を比べてある違いを銘記して下さい~♫ ♪
それより、楽しそうな日だよね!!ゴールがだんだん近くなる!!
そして、もし質問があれば、私を聞いてください~
0 votedMarch 4, 20122Language Partnerを見つける中にこの日記を見ました。直してきました。直した所をごらんになってください~☆ (日本語で説明しましたが分らなかったらごめんなさい!)
Kyoto is rainy..
This time is 19:00pm.
The time is 7 p.m.(もしp.m.を書けば英語に7 p。m。の方が当然です。)
Today is rainy all day.I feel blue..
It has been rainy all day today. I feel blue..(最初の文を整えって現在進行形にしました。)
Because,I can not ride a bike!Because, I can't ride my bike!
(can'tの方が英語に懇談とか日記を書く時に大丈夫だけれどcan notも大丈夫が形式的なニュアンスがあります。そして、この自転車はサッコさんの自転車でしょう?だからmy bikeになりました。)
And Kyoto`s winter is cold. Just 0℃.Kyoto's winter is also cold, just 0*C.
(分の最初のAndを使わないようにalsoに変えました。)
So, I do not outside of a house.So, I don't go outside of my house.
(前の言った説明と同様)
My bike is GSX-R750 and tricker.My bike is a GSX-R750 and tricky.
Do you know? There are very fun!!Do you know? They are very fun!!
(もし当然にすれば..)
They're really fun, you know?!
(They’reはTheyとareと一緒になった言葉です。そして、文の形を当然にしました。)
I love harlay davidson ,too.I also love Harley Davidson bikes.
(AlsoはTooの言葉と同様、同じ意味しているが、Alsoを使うのがもっと当然です。)
Very very rich bike! A lot of harlay in My dream!!Very very expensive bike! But it's in my dreams!!
(Richを使うときとExpensiveを使うときはちょっと違います。大体、物が高い時にExpensiveを使います。そしてもし人がお金持ちだったらRichを使います。そして最後の文の意味があいまいだから、当然にしてみました。)
So I went to harlay davidson University, 7years ago.well...in the Wisconsin.
I went to Harley Davidson University 7 years ago in Wisconsin.
(この二つの文を一緒にしました。そして大文字は気をつけてください~ :)
American foods are no vegetablesgreens?Also why does American food have no green vegetables?
(大体、意味が分らなかったから、文を変わりました。)
I can not ate vegetablesgreens,in America.I couldn't eat green vegetables in America.
(Cannotはちょっと違ってCouldn’tが正しい言葉です。そしてateは過去形だから現在形のeatのほうがいいです。この場合には区切りがいりません。)
Only me???Hope this helps your English language learning. 頑張ってね!
0 votedMarch 3, 20122

