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Good job. You made yourself very clear and there is no grammar mistake. It would be better to put more sentences and information in one sentence and that is what I did.
我的家乡
我的家乡非常美,那里有沙滩,还有一个海岛,我喜欢到那去看鲸鱼和海豚。 (All the information you mentioned are reorganized in logical sequence.)
不过,我的家乡有很多“乡下人”,这点我不太喜欢,还有那里有点儿无聊。I changed "所以我有点儿不喜欢(我的家乡)" into “这点我不太喜欢”.
Although what you wrote is right but the new one expresses in a conciser and native manner.
The meaning of "这点" in English is equivalent to ", which".
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- Are these three sentences grammatically correct? If these sentences are not correct how should I correct these? (1) I hope this letter can facilitate your knowing more about her. (2) I quickly convinced Jack’s high level of persistence. (3) I appreciate the importance both personally and professional of her continued education, the highest loud.December 29, 201350

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