한국어 꾸준히 연습해서 실력을 향상시키려고 노력하는 모습이 정말 좋네요. 수고하셨어요!

Emily knows a lot of social issues in Korea! Her level of the topic in the conversation is pretty high, but, I think she needs more practice on speaking(make a sentence) and reading out. Her "understanding skill (listening, reading)" is very good. However, her "expressing skill(speaking, writing. In this case, I'm just talking about 'speaking'. She is good at writing)" is not as higher as her understanding skill. I think she has to exercise the grammars on TOPIK level 3 to being fluent. Just 'read out loud' and 'make a conversation' practice may be helpful to her. I hope you could express your thought as you think in Korean.

에밀리 씨는 정말 이해력이 뛰어나요. 가끔 말할 때 가벼운 실수를 하지만, 누구든 말할 때 실수를 많이 해서, 걱정이 되지는 않아요. 특히 인상 깊었던 점은 에밀리 씨가 쓰기 숙제를 할 때 실수를 잘 하지 않는다는 점이에요. 에밀리 씨가 아주 침착하고 진중한 분이라는 걸 알게 되어 기뻤어요. :)