Death It's like a compulsory tax that every family has to pitterly pay it it drills the heart to the max making a deep aching hole inside it it's a tricky, rude, professional thief who robs your security blanket in exchange for fear & deathly grief it's a special rubber, made of nothingness to erase one's whole beingness it's death shouts suddenly, making a huge mess with no sound or even a breath.

NIGHTMARES Dreams were very rare My sleeping times were boring and spare I was longing to be an interactive audience To share the events and share Now i'm surrounded by nightmares No one but them did care They are enthusiastic, hardworking, and fair They visit me every nap, snooze, and deep sleeping For their visits and brutal gifts I became aware Yet, I can't dismiss them, I don't dare All I really want is to reach to that status When i can say: " I don't care"

Is it correct? Is (succumbent) the right adjective of the verb (Succumb)?