presentation in English.

Thank you for visit!
I must do a presentation in my class.
I'm halfway done, and, if you don't mind, please check it.
In this situation, I introduce a new product on the market.


Hi. My name is mik.
Thank you all for coming today.
What I’d like to talk about today is our new products, wristwatch watch.
Let me begin by explaining about the function.
This watch is not just a watch.
In short, you have only to press this side button when you are in danger and it will protect you because it has a crime prevention buzzer and light.
Now, I will tell you when it will be useful.
At first, when you are attacked by someone, you have only to push this right button twice, and the buzzer will ring.
You can also use it when you have a disaster and you need help. It will notice your place.
Next, I will explain the left one.
If you push this button twice, the light turns on and you can see over 2 or 3 meters!
So if you want to look for the missing thing in the darkness, you’ll find it soon.
Furthermore, for example, you go to a pop star’s concert like AKB, it can be a penlight.
I’m sure you can attract her attention, but I don’t know if you’ll be told off by the staff.
Of course it goes without saying, it can be used as a normal watch.
And I forgot to mention, there is another advantage to it.
It is a waterproof wristwatch, so you can use it even in the rain.

My dream come true??

I've really wanted to go to Disney with the man who I will like someday,
but possibly I'll go there this Friday!
It was my dream when I was child. TT
It's like a dream to able to go there.
I can't wait any more. XDXD

I want to write "My dream will come true."
However is this expression right?

And please tell me another expression like
"I can't wait!" or "I'm looking forward to being there!"

My favorite music

Although I am Japanese, I have not listened to j-pop these days. I usually listen to k-pop or western music. Through them, I can learn other languages. Actually, when I learn to sing English songs, my listening skills become much better. Probably then I will learn how to pronounce sequences of words, so that I can make progress in listening. I think learning languages is a lot of fun, though I feel that it is a little difficult.

My recent favorite is the sound track of an American drama, "Glee". I'm afraid that I have never seen the drama. I want to see it very much!!! In "Glee", famous songs which I even know are sung. I can understand the meanings of the songs as long as they are written in easy English. I want to make my English better somehow.

Thank you for reading.
Please correct my English.
Glad to hear from you.