2012=2-19

I had an accindent this morning. When I got off the bus, a motor hit me. Fortunately, I am fine and I know that person didn't mean to hit me.

Take care and drive carefully!

 

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Glad you're ok, and nice job!

你好， Li Jinmeng,

The first correction is good. Just one further change I would make:

The atmosphere around me is not condusive to learning English. I can't find someone who is willing to communicate with me in English.

As fdmaxey said, your basics are very solid. Don't get discouraged :)

study power

I've already learned English 7 monthes, even though I thought I didn't have study power sometimes. I found a new power: there is a handsome teacher. He is Irish, he's 29 and he's single. ^^

I'd like to chat with him, like other students, but I don't know how to say what I want to say. So I really want to study hard. That is cool, right?

But someone told me that foreign teachers don't want to chat with us after class, because they think that gives more personal time to us. Is that true? I just want to make friend with them; maybe I can help them to live in China.

Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I expect your replay.

Best regards

 

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I don't know if that's true or not, but nice work on the entry. Good luck with your studies.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I‘m Nozomi. I'm a Japanese girl.
I love fashion and music.

2012-2-12

I have finished my work with a good attitude.

This experience makes me feel that no matter what you do, as long as you do it in a relaxed mood, you will find that it is really just a piece of cake.

All students, I like all of you~

 

Nice entry.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is liuyanan. I come from China. I am a college student. My major is English, so I want to talk to Americans and other native English speakers. Also, I am pretty outgoing. I like to make new friends, especially foreigners. I am looking forward to getting to know you.

 

That's a very good start. 你做得很好.

自我介绍（Self introduction）

Hello, can I be your friend? My name is Li Xiaoyong, from Guangzhou, China. I can speak Chinese, and I want to learn English. I can help people who are studying Chinese, and hopefully someone can help me with my English. We can look forward to common development, improving our language skills.

 

Hope this helps :)

It is indeed true that persons is virtually never used. Even for 两个人, we would say "Two people" and not "two persons." For your other question, it depends on the number of events. If you hold multiple events during the celebration, then the plural is used. For instance, there were multiple events at the start of the Olympics. But a basketball game is one event, no matter how many people play.