Hi everyone, I had a writing task and I would like you to tell me if I made any mistakes
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Travelling is said to be one of the most significant experiences that we have on holiday. It is essential because it makes us more open-minded. However, people have difficulty deciding whether it is better to travel abroad or stay in their own country.
First of all, travelling abroad it is always expensive. If we can afford it, we have to choose carefully where we are going to. We don't want to throw our money around. On the other hand, if you spend money travelling in your own country, you would help its economy.
In addition, we have to consider that to travel abroad, you need to use a different type of transport such as a plane, boat or bus. This pollutes a lot. If you stay in your own country you don't have to travel a long distance, so it's healthier for the environment.
Planning a holiday in our own country allows us to learn about its history. However, going to other countries give us the opportunity to learn about new customs and different languages, which is important for education.
Personally, I consider that people should have both types of holidays from time to time. Also, it's better to visit our own country before travelling to another.