Our whole culture is based on Islamic rules. That's why it's very cooperative. Our culture's name is Pukhtoon, and there are a lot of interesting things in our culture. I will mention one of them. In our culture when someone's family member dies, all of the relatives and people in the town come to give condolences. Most nearby relatives stay for three days, and the people of town prepare food for them.

Hi. I'm slightly a perfectionist about my mind. Sometimes I daydream or fantasize a little more than usual. When I daydream about meeting my high school classmates, I imagine that I am so skinny and fashionable and wear makeup and have a good job that I can show off. When I have daydreams like this, I become stressed and am less satisfied with my life. When I daydream about meeting celebrities and having an awesome job, I am really stressed out, but I'm satisfied with my life. I think this happens to many people. But as I mentioned, I am a bit a perfectionist, so I would love to be satisfied with my life and not daydream. Do you have any tips for that? Being a human who has a perfectionist mindset (It is kind of accepted that no human has a perfect mind. Instead, you can have a perfectionist mindset, which means that you set your mind to aim for perfection. Does that make sense?) is so difficult because of ("Due to" acts as an adjective and can only describe nouns and pronouns. "Because of" is an adverb and describes verbs, adjective, and other adverbs. Since the word being described is "difficult," which is an adjective, use because of.) human nature and our commonality of bottom-up brain. I also can't believe advocates of mindfulness or self-help on the internet also have a perfectionist mindset. Thanks for reading and have a nice day. This is a pretty good paragraph, and it is about a difficult subject with complicated vocabulary. This paragraph has a lot of run-on sentences, which makes it hard to read. If you make your sentences shorter, then it'll be easier to read. If a sentences has more than one dependent clause (from your paragraph, most of your dependent clauses start with "when" and "that,") then it is usually too long, and you can cut it into two sentences.

In my opinion, (You can also say "from my point of view," but "in my opinion" is better.) having the best mental health can improve someone's overall health (Adding "too much" makes it sound like it's a bad thing). Honestly, if you are very sick but your mental health is good, it will help make you healthier faster (Do you mean healthier faster? That's what I assume you mean because it sounds like you're comparing the recovery time of having strong mental health to having weak mental health.) because your brain impacts your body (I understand what you meant, but "under the control of the brain" sounds like something I'd hear in a science fiction movie). From my observation ("According to" is used when the information isn't yours. For example, "according to the newspaper" or "according to my mom."), the people who have good mental health are happy in life and have a long life and a strong and healthy physique.

Hi all, Could someone check my message below? It’s a message to my coworker who will move to another department. Even though we have never met before, I could tell that you have a great sense of humor.😉 It was a pleasure working with you! I wish you all the best with your new life in Korea!

To give their children their love and attention.

Hi Apoorva! This is pretty good, but there are a couple of things that I would change. Most of the corrections are about context. The more advanced in English you become, the more aware you are that certain words are only used in certain situations. It becomes easier to know when to use certain words the more you practice the language. Your paragraph is very good, and I am being very picky. First, I rarely hear "diurnally" used in everyday life. When I looked it up, it seems to usually describe an animal's behavior pattern. For this kind of situation, we usually say, "every day" since it's kind of expected that he's checking his seeds during the day and not at night. Second, you can say dream instead of daydreaming. Daydreaming usually happens when you're bored and to escape your boredom, you escape reality and daydream. In this context, the couple are happy and are anticipating or dreaming about their rich harvest. Third, instead of saying "would not have arrived," a better phrase would be "would not have happened" or "would never have happened." Lastly, I did notice that this is mostly written in the past tense, but it sometimes shifts to the present tense. In English, stories are only told in one tense. The tense choice is up to the writer, but it must be one tense or else it can confuse the reader. The exception to this is when writing dialogue. I hope this was helpful.