Fate in Shaoxing Today i came to Shaoxing, a famous traditional city of Zhejiang. I have been in love with this city as soon as i sat on a tricycle rode by an old but very kind local man since 2 months ago i came here to sign up for tomorrow's examination. This city is famous for Luxun, a great writer in modern China, as well as Lan Pavilion,with which an old well-known poem associated is handing down from generation to generation. I like Shaoxing, for its simple but richness in culture. It's not a grand and modern city, neither crowd on the street, nor isolated from the modern technology. I love Shaoxing, and i hope she also loves me and grant me good luck. I wish everything is ok tomorrow; however, the most important thing is just enjoying the next two days as well as the past endeavoring course.

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How to Concentrate on study? How to come back to concentrate on study when my mind is out of control frequently?