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    主题:我做巧克力蛋糕

    改主题:我做了巧克力蛋糕

    1、前几天我为圣诞节做了两块巧克力蛋糕。做蛋糕的很便宜,我一边能送给多人一边省钱为了别礼物。

    改1:前几天我做了两块巧克力蛋糕,是巧克力味的。做蛋糕很省钱,还能作为礼物送给很多人。

    2、我送给我朋友的时候,一个人已经为他们做蛋糕,而且昨天别人给他们跟多巧克力蛋糕。

    改2:当我送给朋友的时候,发现已经有人为他们做了很多巧克力蛋糕。

    3、o_o 他们现在有这么多蛋糕,不知道他们能吃所有的蛋糕。。。

    改3:现在他们有那么多蛋糕,他们能吃得完么?

    It's the thought that counts!

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    December 15, 2011
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    December 15, 2011
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    The Article about my Apartment I have moved to this new apartment two Months ago. The apartment is convenient, that only be spend about 3-5 minutes arriving the subway station of the line 5, and the subway bring the noisy for me, that' not good. There is one bedroom and one living room, i need to spend 1700.00RMB per month for the rent. A little expensive for me. The whole apartment looks spacious, but not a modern style, i guess the house-owner maybe is an Artist, they left some perfect painting in house. The bedroom looks bright because it towards south, if you sit in the sofa when the daytime, it is easy to feel the sunshine, especially in the winter i very like this part, read an book with a cup of black tea, feel the warming from the sunshine. The living room without the sunshine, so it is dark in sometimes. I always to practice the calligraphy at this part. It's every quite, it easy to come into the state of the calligraphy. let me introduce my kitchen, i like the cooking, like cooking some nice food for my husband. whatever the place is so cramped and shabby, it can't effect my interesting. I will prepare some foods in weekend, flavonful relish and the delicious soup. I really like the family time in weekend. Ok, the apartment is comfortable for me, but i really want to buy a small house for living in shanghai, that i can ornament my owner house, do you agree with me?
    December 15, 2011
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    让我们互相帮助!

    我希望中国的老师谁是我的年龄组。的回报,我可以提高你的英语水平。

    我希望找一位和我同年龄的中国老师,作为回报,我可以提高你的英语水平。

    Hello

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    December 13, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Eilen that is my english name, i come from HuNan province which is a beautiful place in south of China, Now i am stay in Shanghai city and working in a Germany company. i want to improve my english, because my english is so bad. Who can help me improve it, thanks.
    December 12, 2011
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