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    Happy New Year

    Today is Spring Festival. My family is having a good time, and all my relatives will visit my home. I am looking forward to seeing them because we haven't met for a long time.

    新年快樂!Your grammar doesn't have much problem here, except for the verbs "meet" and "go."  I also corrected the punctuation to help the readability.  Don't forget to always put a space after periods, commas, etc. in English.

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    February 5, 2012
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    面紅耳赤 我回來了!因為最近特別忙,我整個月沒有登入italki。這次都沒有心情寫很長的作文。只想用一些新詞做一個簡短的描述: 不知道為甚麼這個男人指著我發怒到面紅耳赤。但是看他的樣子我覺得很搞笑。他雙眉緊蹙眯著眼,好像有人把他的鼻子捏成了尖尖的三角形。同時半開著嘴突出嘴唇,恰當嘴吧變成了一個「口」字形。 我沒有試過用中文詳細地形容一個照片。恐怕這個小作文有很多語法的問題。請糾正我的中文或者提出你自己對下面的照片的描述。
    February 5, 2012
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    December 18, 2011
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    《作文應用詞彙手冊》 今年冬天氣溫一直低於正常。但今天是格外溫暖。所以我跟我的伴侶騎自行車去觀光。途中,去二手店看一下。我本來沒有打算買東西,可是碰到了一本很有意思的中文書,最後就買了。這本書叫《作文應用詞彙手冊》,是一九八五年在香港出版的。書劃分各種各樣的類別,比如「心裡表情」、「李節」、「山水」等等。每一個類別列出許多有關的詞,有一點像同義詞典。乍看之下,每一頁有一行跟著一行的詞,讓我覺得編輯肯定有強迫症,怎麼可以想出來這麼多的詞。來仔細地看,我發現這本手冊真的有用。下一次寫小作文時,我會試試看跳出幾個新詞分析一下。
    December 18, 2011
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    Company brief

    Your checking proofreading and modification will be highly appreciated.

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    Winsun Sports Goods Co.,Ltd. is a HK-owned enterprise founded in 2003 and specializes in developing, manufacturing & selling outdoor high-quality functional fabric, laminated fabric and sports, casual wear. [This sentence is a bit long, may want to break it into two.]

    Its headquarters is are located in Donghai Quanzhou, China. The buildings cover an area of 46,000 square meters and employ more than 1,000 technicians and workers.  Winsun's fixed assets are over RMB two hundred million yuan and the annual output value exceeds RMB three hundred million yuan. The company is Be certified with quality management system ISO9001:2008 and environment management system ISO14001:2004; it also complies with the standards of Japan JIS & OEKO-TEX 100.

    Since its establishment, Winsun adheres to the brand concept of "innovation, speed, leading” and cooperates with well-known raw material manufacturers, of UNIFI & HUIS. Through research and innovation, the company launched its own brands of functional fabric successfully: V-COOL (wicking), V-ANTISUN (anti-UV/wicking), V-GD (antibacterial/deodorization), V-BONDING (wind-resistant/waterproof/breathable). These fabrics have been used by many well-known garment brands in Europe, USA, Japan, Korea etc.

    The company's garment line mainly deals with sports and casual wear. Winsun has established long term business relationship with many customers, such as Carrefour, Walmart, Joma etc.

    Winsun focuses on supplying highly market-competitive products for clients, with professional service and continuous creativity. It continues to be a most reliable partner to its customers.

    <em>This looks like a document for business.  But keep in mind this is not a professional editing service!  So if you do plan to use this for a professional purposes, you might want more specialized help to make sure it's flawless.  I noticed a recurring problem with missing subjects.  I am guessing that you had intentionally left out the subjects in attempt to be more professional.  But it actually achieves the opposite effect.  Casual or rushed writing tends to drop subjects (e.g. writing notes at a meeting or a quick email to a friend).  It's true that we often avoid "I", "my", etc. in professional writing, but there still must be a subject.  Sometimes collective nouns are used like "our", "we", etc.  However, if you need to convey objectivity then you can just stick to "the company", the company's proper name, and "its".  Good luck!</em>

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    December 17, 2011
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    December 15, 2011
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    December 15, 2011
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    leave for "sick"

    My company allows 5 days' for sick leave. 2011 is nearly over, and I have just spent used one of them, so I called for a sick leave today to having supper with a female friend. 

    She is my classmate's friend. When she was planning to come to Peking, her friend---my classmate---called me.  She said, "My friend is going to Peking. Take care of her. By the way, she is single." Sounds good, but I don't know what I feel.

    When I saw her for the first time, I feel nothing, totally nothing. I made myself gentle as a man can be, because she's my classmate, a good friend's friend, and I succeed obviously. I feel sorry of it deeply.

    She's a very nice girl, and does everything properly. She loves her work, loves home her family, but yet we have different opinions about the world. I love my work and love my family with in a very different way. I think work is a part of life. She thinks work is work, life is life, they could never be the same thing. never, She wants to settle down the work in several years and then the life or home. This is I could never understand, I now love my work just as much as so does the my life, so why would I abandon one of them? She now keeping calling me with this or that reason as "just a friend". I hope she really just sees me as a just friend. 

    I heard, if a woman paid for your dinner bill, then you've got no chance to be her boyfriend. I hope it's true.

    <em>I guess you want to find a girlfriend who loves work just as much as you do?  That is interesting, a sign of how our relationships are changing in the modern world, don't you think?</em>

    <em>Your story is well organized.  I just had one sentence where I wasn't sure about your meaning and I highlighted it in blue.  I think you mean to say that your friend wants to quit her work eventually, settle down, and establish a family.  Am I right?  The phrase "settle down" isn't really used with the nount "work".  It's somewhat hard to define too.  I think it generally means the point where people focus more on having a stable home and raising children instead of realizing career ambitions, travelling, etc.  </em>

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    December 15, 2011
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    槍射事 我今天比較晚下班,七點一刻才走。雖然天氣很冷,自己也很累,我還走路回家。我一邊走一邊看城市的夜景,腦子裡的煩惱慢慢消失了。突然一輛警車從後邊急速駛出。警車往著我的家那邊走。過了一會又看到一輛。真奇怪,發生甚麼事呢? 我回了家,本來沒有人在。不到幾分鐘我的女朋友開門了。她朝著粗氣地說「我差點被車撞死了!」她繼續說「我過馬路的時候,有一輛車不停著轉過來。我忽然地走開,那輛金色車一下子停了,被後邊的警車撞到了。原來四周有警車,警察立即跳出了汽車,抓著長槍指著金色車的司機,大聲地叫他出來。真的,好像好萊塢電影一樣!」。 我們檢查了新聞,發現今天晚上七點半在附近的一座咖啡館裡有一個人被射傷了。目擊者說,犯罪嫌疑人駕車逃離。很恐怖!
    December 14, 2011
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    December 14, 2011
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