First notebook entry: Introducing myself
你好都人! (表示问候时都用“你好”——to friend,“您好”——to Elder,more 2 people,you can say "你们好”
我要学习汉语因为我爱中国。(It's right)
我访问上海两次但是我要去再。我可以帮你用英语。“访问”is leader visit one place,you can use"去过,到过”。“但是”means "but"。“去再”turn to “再去”,in English, “too” in the end, but in Chinese not in the end。
I don't know if you understand me what to say ,my English is poor , but i'm very please to help you learn Chinese.
我不知道你是不是能懂我说什么,我的英文太差了。但是我非常高兴可以帮你学中文。