There are some wrong words, many Chinese characters have few difference,but they have different means totally. In addition, there are small mistakes in describing.I correct them as follows,pelease notice different characters O(∩_∩)O~:
——Melvine
你 好!
我叫沙拉
我有两个儿子
大儿子五岁
少儿子三岁
我们住在澳大利亚
我 们 想 学习 中文
谢谢
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
你 好!
我 叫 沙 拉
我有 两个儿字
大儿字是五岁
少儿字是三岁
我们住在澳大利亚
我 们 想 learn 中国文
谢谢