First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am serving in an organization as Financial Manager. Often I have to write comments on rules and regulations passed by the BoD due to their inconsistancy <em>with the nature of work of the organization </em>(this phrase may be redundant unless there is meaning I am not picking up). My English grammar is not good because of this people fail to understand what I want to say. I () therefore, want to improve my english writing.

Real Steel (Hugh Jackman) vs Over the Top (Sylvester Stallone)

In some ways I found that Real Steel and Over the Top are quite similar. A frustrated Dad with nothing to lose, a son who is not getting along with him well, an activity that the Dad is good at, wealthy relatives to contrast his dead end, and most importantly - a monster truck.

Real Steel is no way less than Over the Top in terms of visual or sound effects, () both of them gave me the same level of excitement. I even rated over the top more hot-blood than real steel for Stallone was actually competing inside the ring. When I was watching Hugh Jackman in the final fight, I had 3 seconds of laughter when I imagined him punching and jumping in front of big green screen so stupidly when filming, in contrast to that this scene was meant to align audience with him in() the fight and get them hyper.

The son in Real Steel is very good looking, while who in Over the Top is rather cool and sensitive.

I guess Over the Top has moved me much more than Real Steel for Stallone's decent performance and it is the pioneer (of what?)