Loving article

Hi everyone!
Today, I read an article in my mother tongue, and I am going to translate it into English. It’s all about a girl named Riya and a boy named Saman who had fallen in love with each other. Both wanted to get married. Unfortunately, Saman was already married and had two children. The girl did not care about this, but they were afraid to tell their parents particularly Riya’s. She was aware that their parents would not allow her to marry a person who was (better the previous are also past) already married and had two children. So,(it's not good to start a sentence with so) One day she came across an advocate’s(?) cell phone number who was a lecturer in a college as well. He could not respond to her call since he was giving lecture in the college. After he was done with the lecture, he called the unknown number, and she responded to his call and immediately asked, "Are you an advocate?" Gradually, she begin conversing with him and told him of the whole story and why she was confused. She kindly asked the advocate to advise her as a brother. (the following sentence is too long. Consider revising)The advocate said that if you admire me as a brother just let me know about the person who has fallen in love with you, what he would do with his first wife and how would he manage to keep both of you happy. According to law, due to some reason he may leave her first wife. For instance, perhaps she is accused or alleged of different things, or maybe she cannot give birth to any child. She may have a desire to marry another man, but what you would get by being the cause of leaving her in that situation. You would get just a temporary happiness, and what if someday it happens to you. A person who can cheat his first wife can cheat you as well. He said, "I would never be satisfied that(I don't understand this) any girl for their own happiness sells their parent’s respect and forgets that she was in her mom’s womb for nine months. He also added that how could this be a love if boy asks you to sacrifice your parents and let them be defamed. Love does not defame anyone rather it is given. (I don't understand this.) Love is given to a brother, sister, mother, father, society as well as to humanity. Love teaches us to respect parents not to make them feel shy in front of other people. That innocent girl heeded his suggestion and appreciated it as well. After their long conversation she understood that she would never go against their parents. I would say to love someone is not a bad idea, but being already married and without anyone’s permission it just does not make any sense. Anyways see you with another notebook entry and have a good day guys.

As a teacher I can say that these questions would not offend me. Generally, such questions are very common in conversation. I would say that it is okay to use them. However, some people are very private. If a line of questions feels offensive to a person, they have the right to ask to change the subject.

whether I wrote a sentence in Present Continuous

1)Where is Mykola? Present idea-He is reading in the reading room. He is doing homework there. Mykona often doing him homework there. This idea is no present progressive, but should be "Mykona often does his homework there."
2)You should not be going into that room. Student's from our class are making up Math exams in there.
3)Is it raining? No, it isn't raining, but a strong wind is blowing!
4)We are going there tomorrow.


Please,correct me_all this sentences must be in Present Continuous_
THANK YOU!

Present Continuous is (be verb + present participle)

my sister will get married

My sister will get marriedtomorrow. I am truly happy for my sister; however, I am bit  saddened, because she will belong to another guy. I won't chat with her everyday. Anyway,I want her to be happy. I wish a happy marriage to my dear sister.

 

 

Congratulations!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everybody!
Very nice to meet you.
My name is Liao Ping Hua. My family name is Liao. You can call me "Ping Hua". I come from Xia Men city FuJian province China.
I work in a foodstuff company in XiaMen city. Our factory manufactures bbq meat such as prok bbq, beef bbq and chicken bbq ect. I am a mechainic in the company's Maintenance Dept.
I have taken much time to learning English, but find it is really difficult for me. I want someone who can help with my both written English and spoken English. Also hope you can give me some good ways to learn this language.

Thanks for your kind help.