Please correct my essay about Harry Potter)

Before third year at Hogwarts students needed to buy lots of things. Fortunately, they could find all of them in one place - Diagone Alley - the long cobbled street was packed with the most fascinating wizarding shops in the world.

First of all, Harry replenished his store of potions in the Apothecary. Then he bought new robes in Madam Malkin's Robes for All Occasions. Finally he went to the Flourish and Blotts to buy his new schoolbooks for two new subjects - Care of Magical Creatures and Divination. The Monster Book of Monsters was listed as the required book for Care of Magical Creatures, but he already had one - Hagrid sent it to him as a birthday present. For Divination he took Unfogging the Future by Cassandra Vablatsky.

Ron bought the same set of books as Harry and a new wand, because his previous one had snapped accidentally last year. He also found a rat tonic for Scrabbers the rat in a magical creature shop - Magical Menagerie. Scrabbers looked thinner than usual after the trip to Egypt.

Hermione was taking more new subjects, so she bought books for Arithmancy, Care of Magical Creatures, Divination, the Study of Ancient Runes and Muggle Studies. She intented to buy an owl as an early birthday present in the Magical Menagerie, but when she went in she met a ginger cat and decided to have him instead of an owl.

In my opinion, the Magical Menagerie is the most wonderful shop in Diagon Alley. I would like to buy a magical creature, I have always wanted to have a pet. Very likely I would buy a cat, I adore cats of every shape and colour. Honestly, I believe that it is impossible to buy a pet, we just can meet each other. If we like one another and I notice it clearly, I'll buy a cat no matter what powers it has.