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I'm a student learning English and french now. I want to be a simulaneous interpreter in the future. I'm also a classical music fan, and love to play the violin and the piano in my spare time. Here, I hope I can help you with your Chinese, and find someone to help me corret my essays.
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    June 5, 2018
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    I want to say as a foreigner, you really did a good job in writing this.  But there are still some problems.

    请纠正我的论文(作文)*1

    因为中国是个古老而却年轻的国家,所以我很早就对中国感兴趣了,并且希望有一天能去中国学习汉语。这个愿望终于实现了,我获得了一次机会去中国学习汉语的机会。
    我父母知道了我的愿望,因此他们说,虽然现在你你现在的工作很好,但是如果你真的想去,就去,这次经历对于你的将来这次经历一定有许多好处。他们只嘱咐我要注意身体,注意安全,每天给他们打电话。
    因为我已经独立地生活了很长时间了,所以容易离别我的家离开家对于我来说不是特别的困难。但是到中国以后,我很想我的父母和朋友,为了表达我对他们的爱和想念,常常跟他们联系。所以我常常和他们联系,表达我对他们的爱和想念。

    *1,In China, we often call this kind of article “作文” , not "论文“. "论文” is much more formal.

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    June 5, 2018
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    Understanding of Success (a record of our class meeting) Recently, we had a class meeting whose topic was "success". Views varied from person to person. At least three different opions were carried out by different students. Some students thought success was to become rich. Money can't buy everything in the world but can enable people to live comfortably without worrying about daily budgets. However, some held the view that success had nothing to do with money or reputation, living a happy life is a real success. Instead of working day and night to earn money, spending more time with families and enjoy your life are more important. But others preffered to treat success as whether your goal have achieved or not. As far as I'm concerned, success doesn't mean anything, what we learnt on our way to success is the real treasure in our life. (My expression and vocalburary are so limited, hope you could give me some suggestions on it, thank you !)
    June 5, 2018
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    Learning Dairy Since that one of my teachers told me that you can only aquire a language when you really use it, I convince myself to write down something in English everyday, and wait to see if there're any improvements. Today, I'm going to write down something about a old but still very popular among Chinses English learners American TV series----Friends. Before I saw this TV show(r there many differences beween TV show and TV series?), I heared it many times in English learning forums, many many people recommend it as a funny TV show which has daily dialogues and is suitble for people to learn oral English. (They also recommend Modern Family, Desperate Housewife,etd. Are thiese worth watching?)They also suggest a method that need to be followed if you want to improve English by watching TV. I think this method may also be helpful for learning other languages(except Chinese, although I'm a Chinsese, I have to say it's really among one of the most difficult languages in the world ). Steps as followed: 1. Just watch it with subtitles, from beginnin to the end. Feed your curiosity, understand the main plot and characters. 2. After knowing what this TV show is talking about, watch it second time. This time try to focus on listening. Write down new words and phrases. 3.Watch it third times. Do not look at subtitles. 4. Pick up the sentences that you may often use but don't know how to speak correctly, recite them, learn them by heart. OK, today I've wrote enough words, will write about Friends next time.
    January 12, 2016
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    the sun is good, and everything is good Today is my second day in Shenzheng. It's very warm here, the temperature is almost 17 degree centigrade. So I can take off my thick winter clothes and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Now, I have finished all my class as a student, and decide to find myself a job here. But when I start seeking, I get at a loss, I don't know what kind of job suit me, and what I can do as a graduate of English major. Anyway, I will work harder, and if you have any good suggestions, u can send me a mail.
    December 30, 2013
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    Diet and Nutrition 饮食和营养

    饮食和营养是非常重要? Yǐnshí hé yíngyǎng shì fēicháng zhòngyào?
    因为快餐不够营养 Yīn wéi kuàicān bùgòu yíngyǎng
    然后我们营养不良Ránhòu wǒmen yíngyǎng bùliáng
    我们需要多吃天然鱼,肉和蔬菜 wǒmen xūyào duō chī tiānrán yú, ròu hé shūcài
    因为天然食物的酶 Yīn wéi tiānrán shíwù de méi
    否则,我们有健康问题 Fǒuzé, wǒmen yǒu jiànkāng wèntí

    Why Diet and Nutrition is important?
    Because natural food lacks of nutrition.
    And then we suffer from malnutrition.
    So we need to eat more natural food.
    We need to eat more natural fish, meat and vegetables.
    Because natural food has enzymes.
    Or else we will have health problems.

     

    Your Chinese is good, but still have some problems.

    and others  has helped to correct it.

    here is my Chinese version.

    为什么合理膳食和均衡营养很重要呢?

    因为快餐(natural food?)不够营养

    (经常吃)我们就会营养不良

    所以我们要多吃天然食物

    我们要多吃天然的鱼类、肉类和蔬菜

    因为天然的食物中含有酶

    (没有这些酶)我们就会出现一些健康问题。

    one of differences between  English and Chinese is there're more verbs in Chinese. 

     

    好好学习,天天向上~

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    August 6, 2013
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    Why learning languages is so hard!?! Like most Chinese children, I began to learn English in my primary school. At that time,I thouht learning English it's a task, because we had to pass English exams to enter junior schools or high schools. , learning English is memorizing English words and grammar rules. Later, when I entered university, English is my major, I have to memorize more words, and read a lot, but I still can't understand some English novels, stories and some news. I get very disappointed, I wonder if I'm wasting my time. Now, I'm still learning English, but I can't see any improvement. I began to learn French in my second semester as a sophomore.French is compulsory course for us. At the beginning, I thouht maybe French isn't very very hard to learn because French shares the same alphabet with English, but later, the more I learn in the class the harder I feel. The conjugaison is really hard to memorize. And there' re some same words in French and English, but the pronunciation are different, that's drive me to crazy. Why learning languages is so hard? Can you give me some advices?
    April 2, 2013
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    I'm a atheist, but I think religion is very important to some people. Maybe it's a tradition for them to have a religion.

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    April 2, 2013
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    wow, so many people love One Piece, I love it too~

    but I prefer Bleach!!!!

     I love kurosaki!!!!!!!!!

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    December 10, 2012
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    Maldives! if I have a chance, I reall want to go there!

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    December 10, 2012
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