First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am an optimistic girl and like making friends. I always want to play and not study. However, when I do study, my skills are not bad.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,my name is jane.I'm a junior student.Actually,I'm an English major.However,my English is not well (good) .I want to improve it.I hope here (this place) can offer me a stage to learn it.

Well use for verbs

Good use for nouns, English is a noun

English or Chinese

I find that the Documents of technology written by （in) English is (more) clear than (documents) written by (in) Chinese. Why ? I think some translator without
deeply digging into technology write these books for mony (money), consequently the readers find reading articles by (in) English is more clearer than by (in a) language which is their native language!

Culture Different: Living With Parents after Marriage

How do you think about living with parents after marriage? In Taiwan, people think that it is common situation to live with parents. It could be easier to take good care of them. In addition, they think it is their duty to keep (them) company with them though（through) out their life, just to give love and care as (in) return. However, In the U.S.A, when children grow up or get married, they move out mostly. Both the parents and their children think it is time to be independent. What a totally different thought between two cultures. As far as I am concerned, parents are never stop to have (having) patience, make (making) efforts and pay (paying) attention to look after (their) children even (as) they grow old. Therefore, I think all they need is neither money nor (a) magnificent house, what they want is: Just (for their children to) be there for them and (to) love them. That is the best way to make them know how much we love them and (so) they also can feel the warmness.



This is my English homework. My teacher told me to revision it. Could you give me some advice?