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My Plans For Summer Vacation
Hi guys, I am happy to share my vacation plans with you. My best friend is making a plan to visit Tokyo Disney. He invited me to go with him and I promised. I have been to Disneyland years before. I remembered that i played carousel, enjoyed musical theater, visited Dream Garden where I saw Snow White, Mickey Mouse, Winnie the Pooth and many other cartoon characters, and took a lot of photos with them. This time i want to explore Disney Sea, and try some high-speed, thrilling attractions, such as tower of terror, Raging Spirits and so on. In fact, I have been hoping to go to the Disney with my boyfriend. Unfortunately, I'm still single.
Apart from going to Disney, maybe i will have a trip to Taiwan. I am crazy for characteristic snacks around the world. I have heard that Taiwan snacks are very delicious and been looking forward to tasting authentic Taiwanese snacks, especially the famous Tainan Danzai noodles and oyster omelet.
And the most important part of my vacation plan is doing a part-time job. I want to earn my next semester tuition. Therefore maybe i won't have much time to study. To tell the truth, i don't keen on learning. Rather than sitting at the desk and study for a long time, I prefer to acquiring experience through doing part-time jobs, traveling and other ways.
Those are my plans. Thanks.0 votedJuly 14, 20120- My Plans For Summer Vacation Hi guys, I am happy to share my vacation plans with you. My best friend is making a plan to visit Tokyo Disney. He invited me to go with him and I promised. I have been to Disneyland years before. I remembered that i played carousel, enjoyed musical theater, visited Dream Garden where I saw Snow White, Mickey Mouse, Winnie the Pooth and many other cartoon characters, and took a lot of photos with them. This time i want to explore Disney Sea, and try some high-speed, thrilling attractions, such as tower of terror, Raging Spirits and so on. In fact, I have been hoping to go to the Disney with my girlfriend. Unfortunately, I'm still single. Apart from going to Disney, maybe i will have a trip to Taiwan. I am crazy for characteristic snacks around the world. I have heard that Taiwan snacks are very delicious and been looking forward to tasting authentic Taiwanese snacks, especially the famous Tainan Danzai noodles and oyster omelet. And the most important part of my vacation plan is doing a part-time job. I want to earn my next semester tuition. Therefore maybe i won't have much time to study. To tell the truth, i don't keen on learning. Rather than sitting at the desk and study for a long time, I prefer to acquiring experience through doing part-time jobs, traveling and other ways. Those are my plans. Thanks.July 14, 201220
我爱我的奶奶 ：
在这里，我用我会写的语言——普通话写一篇短文，对不起，如果我的论文中有许多错误，因为我不是一个人在书面写作普通话熟练使用。
（可以将这两句的位置调换一下：对不起，因为我不是一个能在书面写作方面熟练运用普通话的人，所以我的论文中可能会有许多错误，希望你们帮助我一起修改。）
我会告诉 我的祖母 是谁你 现在身患重病。他 她 的第二次 手术刚刚结束通过的行动。说实话我很伤心，即使我没有不曾如此接近我的祖母，但我非常喜欢他。她是我的爸爸的妈妈，是谁对我很尊敬的 我非常地尊敬她。他们的脸非常相似。当我看到奶奶的痛苦的表情，我的心也疼很心疼，因为我喜欢看到自己的父亲的笑脸，不忍心看他脸上保存显露的痛苦。我只能祈求上帝，问让我奶奶能承受度过这一切痛苦。我的祖母很可能无法再恢复我的父亲说。
因为在。她的身上有很多器官被破坏损坏了。我是将会失去谁？是我的兄弟们都非常喜爱的奶奶。怕。我感到很伤心，因为我从来没有使我自己的祖母，因为我而感到开心。加强我的奶奶，我希望奶奶要坚强。她很薄弱虚弱。为什么他她要接触到这种疾病？为什么她会患上肺癌？
谁被滥用：（强大的奶奶不用担心，神总是与你同在，我爱我的奶奶！ ：）
补充：第一句话中的这个符号： —— 叫做破折号，它在此的作用的补充说明，就是进一步告诉读者“你会写的语言是普通话”。
希望我的修改能帮助到你，更希望你的奶奶能健康起来。
0 votedAugust 17, 20110高尚的工作
我小的时候想成为垃圾工人 应为因为 我觉得 指重 工业很好玩。
我从车道 看了看见 他们从大卡车后面的台上跳下去。
我想，”卡车在 行动的时 前进时，能 站 在卡车的外边 站 ，一定会给你翱翔的感觉。“
一 个 动作就提起 来 垃圾箱，把 内容 垃圾甩进 去 大卡车。
我想，”他 针状 真强壮。肌肉一定很发达阿！”
但是 我现在绝对不想成为垃圾工人。我猜想 他 们的生活很 痛苦艰苦。他们很可能常常被玻璃 受伤扎伤。因为每天提很重的垃圾箱 而所以将来背和膝盖很容易会有问题。
但是，如果他们不帮我们没有他们帮助我们，还有谁会帮我们处理垃圾？若果没有他们的 援助帮助，我们的家里会 仍然肮脏非常脏乱。
谢谢垃圾工人。我 真正的尊配真心地尊敬您！0 votedAugust 17, 20110- hello everyone Hi ! I'm Trista, a freshman. I'm an outgoing girl but i sometimes very shy...like reading,listening to music,watching movies and making friends. I think it interesting to study English. What's more, it becomes a necessary tool to compete with others. But i seldom speak English to others because i worry about making mistakes. I join italki with the purpose of improving my English, especially my oral English. I think italki is a good platform to study and communicate. I hope i can speak English fluently someday and make more friends here.August 16, 201120
