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大家好,我是沈木槿~一位来自中国的学生! Hello, I'm 沈木槿~ A student from China! みなさん、こんにちは,はい、そうです沈木槿~中国から来た学生です!
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    昨天我特别喜欢的政客进行了辩论。 他们集中讨论了现代社会中最紧迫的问题,每个人都在合理和逻辑上证实了他的观点。讨论很热烈;它持续了两个小时,所以我一直看着它结束了。有些结论我赞成,有些我不同意。 It's your original text, Here is my revision of your original text:昨天我特别喜欢的政客进行了辩论。Change to:昨天我和我特别喜欢的政客进行了辩论。 I think what you mean by this sentence is that yesterday I had a debate with my favorite politician。 The second sentence,他们Change to:我们。Because it's not that they have a discussion, it's you who have a discussion,So the first person is us,that is“我们” 它持续了两个小时,所以我一直看着它结束了Change to:我们讨论了两个小时之后结束了。What do you mean:It lasted two hours, so I kept watching him finish.(This expression is wrong.)And the revised meaning is:We talked about it for two hours and then it came to an end.(The expression in China is correct.) The rest of the sentences are correct!!It's great!excellent.I hope my answer will help you,thank you.
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    July 6, 2020
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    这是一个路标,警告(警告改成告诉)你在接下来的190公里内可能遇到袋鼠。 在野生生物(在野生动物中),袋鼠只生活在澳大利亚。 袋鼠是后腿有力的快速动物,它们突然的出现在道路上时很危险。(他们突然出现在道路上时,是很危险的。) 在俄罗斯也能看到有鹿,麋鹿或牛的路标。 我开车时并看到这些路标,我总是减慢速度。(我开车时看到这些路标之后,我就会减慢速度。) In the brackets are the sentences I changed, I think these sentences should be revised, I hope my answer will help you, thank you.
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    July 6, 2020
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