First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everybody, my name is Jiaqi, but you can also call me my English name, Lala.(remember to put spaces after periods and commas!) I work for an English education organization company. My job is to find and help more people who want to improve their English skills. Everyone has a dream, and my dream of present is to get a chance to study English for free in our company. In order to achieve the my dream I do work very hard everyday to generate sales. I expect to get a more bigger space for development, and attaining/achieving my dream could be very hard. However, I'm not afraid to face these difficulties.To gain the same as (what do you mean by gain here?) theothers, I have to pay double or even triple as much as they do. Owning a good English skill could make it more easily (Being more proficient in English would make this much easier.) I would like to study English with people from all over the world who have the same dream!

Very good, keep it up!