Search from various English teachers...
Profile
Happy Go Lucky ~ and
Learning
Korean
Chinese (Mandarin)
Language Skills
EnglishNative
Lesson Feedback
Lesson history
 Last monthLast 3 monthsAll time
Completed lessons000
Attendance rate100%100%100%
Teacher reviews
No record
Activities
  • Corrected

    terrible, find another essay, I hope I am a hard drive

    It seems that competition has become ever increasingly fierce throughout the world. Some nations, however, have formulated legislations to regulate working hours. Although there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, it is my personal belief that this trend is in the best of our interest.

    The reason why law enforcement agencies have introduced such laws, in my view, is to safeguard the basic right of the citizens. Without these laws, there would be a greater tendency to exploit the employees by inhumane employers and especially those who work in factories doing repetitious and less skill-demanding jobs. It is not uncommon to read in newspapers about factories with a system of more than 12-hour work days with no break time in between. These workers, unfortunatley, endure such harsh conditions since they need to support their families and there are no laws in place to protect them. In contrast, introducing laws to regulate long work hours can protect these works from being overworked and exploited. Employees will be empowered to report companies that violate these laws. 

    Though there are debates regarding these regulation laws stating that these laws could undermine a companies productivity, I believe these laws would instead further boost our economic development. It has been scientifically proven that a tired and overworked employee can never reach their maximum potential.  Furthermore, industrial accidents occur most often than not due to negligence as a result of fatigue. Another contributing factor is that a heavy workload leads to poorer health conditions, inducing psychological and physiological stress on the workers. Higher illness rates will also negatively affect a workers productivity.

    0 voted
    October 19, 2011
    1
  • Corrected

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    glad to make good friends with u and share joy & pain in life !

    another way to express yourself more clearly:

    I look foward to becoming good friends with you and sharing our experiences.

     

    0 voted
    October 10, 2011
    0
  • Posted
    功夫熊猫2~ 功夫熊猫2太好看了。 建议各位的朋友们都去看看哦 不去看就会对不起自己了,千万不要对不起自己 记得看好了后来找我讨论 haha, please fix my Chinese
    June 10, 2011
    10
    1
  • Corrected

    when ur love leaves u

    when he left me, i lost my world
    when he left me, i lost myself
    when he left me, i'd thought I'd be okay with it as well
    I just needed time
    I asked myself "Did my love mean anything?"

    I had given everything for our love, but gained nothing in return
    If a man only loves himself
    Why shouldn't you let him go?!

    You knew who he was after the first week, and yet why did you continue?
    I don't understand you!!!
    Add oil!!! n  

    :)

    0 voted
    June 10, 2011
    3
  • Answered
    "too good to be true"
    0 voted
    February 9, 2011
    0
  • Posted
    Ren's notebook entry: Feb 02, 2011 Happy Bunny Year! I sent everyone a red envelope so if you didn't get yours, it most likely got lost in the mail. Ha!
    February 2, 2011
    1
    1
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    November 16, 2010
    0
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    November 15, 2010
    0
  • Posted
    oh nice~ Wow, what happened before happened again. At least i'm better prepared this time.
    November 6, 2010
    2
    1
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    August 22, 2010
    0