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Sometimes, I enjoy the memories of the time that I accompanied my older brother to the (field?) to catch fish and run in the summer sun and comforting wind. This time was really the happiest and most relaxing time. The older I become, the more valuable this memory is to me.

Great! This memory sounds so peaceful!

066_2008 Could you help me by correcting the text ?【The thing that l’m thinking every summer】

August has come as usual this year.

The thing that l think about every summer is the end of the World War Ⅱ. The my grandfather’s generation experienced it, but most people, including me, feel as though it were a long time ago (I had some trouble understanding this sentence). With less old people, l’m worried that the living memories of the war will be gradually forgotten.

Which facilities should receive money from local authorities?

Hi guys! I need this text to sound quite formal. Please, let me know if I have spelling or writing mistakes. Many thanks!

I would like to <s>put forward </s>present my ideas regarding the facilities which should be supported by the authorities. <s>To my mind</s> From my point of view, sports centers, as well as public gardens are of utmost importance for our town. However, I would <s>come out</s> prioritize funding for public gardens. Below I will explain my point of view.

<s>Firstly</s> Primarily, public gardens provide a great opportunity for people to be out in the fresh air. I consider that many of them would be happy to take a break from the offices and computers. Besides, the green areas <s>might (</s>you are trying to convey your message with confidence, don't be afraid to use definite answers! it makes your opinion appear more credible 😃) will encourage the citizens to <s>do sports</s> be active outdoors. Here, I see plenty of choices from jogging to yoga. I believe that these opportunities would lead <s>us</s> our community to a healthier lifestyle. Let us not forget that the town needs spaces for people with <s>kids</s> children ”children” is more formal than “kids”. A new public garden would be a safe area with no cars around; <s>that is why</s> for this reason, parents would be sure that their children <s>had the area to run around being out of danger </s>would be free to run and play, without the threat of passing cars.

<s>Speaking</s> About sports centers, I have doubts about the necessity <s>to build</s> of building <s>the</s> new ones. <s>Probably, </s>We should conduct research on how many people go to the gym now and how many of others would like to start going <s>doing that</s>. <s>In case</s> If the existing sports centers are not packed or only a few citizens are determined to work out, this initiative could be put on hold.

<s>Summing up </s>To sum it all up, in my opinion, public gardens are the facility that should be financed by the authorities, <s>whereas the situation with sports centers is questionable.</s> and should take priority over establishing new sports centers that may not have as much as an impact on our community.