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Hello, there! I'm interested in meeting conversation partners for German practice. I've studied German all throughout high school and university and completed a six week study abroad in Germany. However, I haven't had much occasion to speak the language. I'm eager to begin refreshing my knowledge and adding on to it! As for my interests and la de da, I enjoy writing (and do a bit of it on a freelance basis for a living), singing (in a good or bad way), reading, knitting, travel (for real or in my head), thinking about off-kilter things, and indulging in my fascination for things that make others squeamish (flesh-eating bacteria, anyone)? Lots more besides - so get in touch!
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    Hello, everyone!

    Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Zunpu Zhang. I am a senior high school student! I want to speak good English! I'm crazy about improving myself. I know that the more hardship I endure, the more glorious my life will ultimately be!

    The reason why I want to speak good English is that English is an international language and also a bridge linking all countries together! Thus, English is beautiful, powerful and useful. People all over the world are learning English now. We Chinese must learn English too.

    This is me! Let's just do it!

    And you write English very well! The corrections are pretty minor. Hope they help!

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    Oooh, dramatic!

    Without realizing it, she fell over the cliff. When she was falling, the woman remembered him with tears in her eyes. She couldn't understand how he died in a car accident.

    Good job! Here's some notes:

    The phrase is this instance is usually "without realizing it". 

    You're referring to one woman, so "her" instead of "their". 

    You don't need to capitalize "he", Some religious people will do it when referring to god. Otherwise, unless it's the first word of the sentence, part of a title,  the only pronoun you need to capitalize consistently in English is "I". 

    "Car accident" doesn't need a hyphen. 

     

     

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    Arbeit, Geld, Mehr Geld, Mehr Arbeit und die Welt Es is Zeit auf eine neue Job zu suchen. Nicht leicht. Einerseits habe ich mehr Freiheit als Freiberuflerin meine eigene Plan zu machen. Andererseits bleibe ich zu Hause den ganzen Tag. Ich muss auch mehr Geld verdienen. Bin ich wirklich eine Erwachsene? Im Moment gibt es zwei Möglichkeiten: Flugbegleiterin oder etwas bei einem Verlag. Ich habe mich schon fur Stellen bei Virgin America und Continental Airlines bewerben. Leider möchten die ganze Welt Stellen bei Fluglinie auch. Einige von diesen Leute sind total bessessen von dieser Ziel. Sehr erschrekend!
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