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- Cohesion and coherence in essay writing To write academic texts is necessary to master certain skills in order to achieve an excellent written. In some cases, students do not develop an adequate work due to they do not have clear certain main aspects at the moment of compose an essay, two of those components are denominated cohesion and coherence. Firstly, cohesion is one of the key elements in a well written paragraph because it is focused in unity so it unified paragraphs making relationships through the use of transitions or linking words and phrases, conjunctions, prepositions and so on. To develop cohesion is necessary that every sentence be closely related to the topic. A strong paragraph will eliminate sentences what do not relate or develop the main idea. Thus, a composition with cohesion will only have paragraphs that are crucial to develop the thesis. Secondly, the another relevant element that shapes a good paragraph is coherence, it works as a support in sentences to get a logical structural and connect to each other developing a balance in where all ideas have to work together. In this way, coherence help to the paragraph to flow smoothly from one sentence to the next, and it make easier for reader to understand the writting. To summarize, cohesion and coherence are complemented itself, it means that both elements are essential in a written composition to achieve an ideal essay. Cohesion establish unity to relate one idea to another to create logic and clarity. Coherence arrange and connect ideas to achieve an adequate pattern of organization.November 18, 202000
- Sunrise Today I wake up early, I do not why I cannot sleep adequately because neither I could sleep Yesterday nor today. I hate this days because my body turns weak and tired to do my activities. I will try to avoid get stress because it might get worse the situation. I hope this day will be amazing. Good morning, thanks to people who corrected this short paragraph :)August 11, 202020
- Instrucciones para Lauren (Practicando el subjuntivo)¡Hola, Lauren!Gracias por cuidar de nuestra gata, Eve, este fin de semana. Siempre es tan difícil encontrar alguien que nos ayude cuando estemos de viaje.Ben y yo queremos que visites la casa cada día para que puedas darle a Eve su cena. Ella prefiere que pongas su comida en la taza blanca. Sugerimos que llegues a las siete de la tarde porque ella siempre come a esta hora.Tememos <s>de</s> que ella pase todo el fin de semana sin hacer nada. Entonces, después de la cena, pedimos que juegues con Eve por algunos minutos.Finalmente, puedes darle algunas golosinas para gatas, a menos que no haya más en el tarro.Aquí está nuestro número de teléfono, en caso de que necesites ayuda con algo (###-####).¡Un abrazo para ti y Eve!Casey & Ben0 votedJuly 22, 20201
- ¿Como te sentirías si tuvieras la experiencia del destierro?Me sentiría como un barco perdido en el mar. Claro que me gusta viajar y ahora vivo fuera de mi propio en un país, pero extrañaría mi país porque no importa que viva en otro país, en mi alma siempre soy de mi tierra natal. Separarme de mi tierra natal sin la opción de volver, sería vivir sin mi alma. Para mi, la tierra natal es la fuente de todo lo que se basa mi vida. Me dio todo, lo malo y bueno y sacárme, lo sacaría todo.También creo que sobreviviría al destierro y eventualmente florecería. Tengo mucha experiencia vivendo fuera de mi país y sé acostumbrarme a ambientes distintos. Soy muy adaptable y deseo estar contenta en cualquier lugar, en cualquier condición.0 votedJuly 22, 20200
- My sister's birthday I am so excited because my little sister Paola will be twenty years old on July 28, but with my family decided to prepare a meeting with relatives and some friends to celebrate her birthday on this weekend. Today, my other sister and I bought some things to decorate, for example, punk and white ballons, streamers and candies. My Mother is in charge of the food, she wants to serve roasted chicken. Although, almost every thing seems to be ready, I do not what could be the perfect gift for her because Paola is a little complicated and maybe if I buy something that I think she would like but in reality no I will feel bad , so to avoid this kind of inconvenient I have to think minuciosly to select the ideal surprise for her. For instace, I have in mind in give her make up because currently she is trying to learn about this, and in the same way a fragance could be a good option. All in all, I want that this weekend arrive soon to remark this special date together my family, obviously taking account all biosequrity measures relating to this pandemic.July 21, 202031
- Essay to my homework: Animal experimentation One of these arguments that support this disagreement are the ethical reasons that attack the sensitivity of animals. Nevertheless, the use of toxic substances on animals for the development of chemical products has been used in cleaning or make up products industries without taking into account that it is an unacceptable practice because animals are living beings and they do not deserve to be treated in this way. For example, Ritar (2019) argues that makeup companies such as Avon clinically tests their products on animals and they are usually killed after such procedures. On the other hand, there is an aspect that benefits humans health, it is one of the main justifications for this trivial activity. This is the case of Pasteur, a scientist who studied infectious illnesses on domestic animals, and he discovered the medicine to treat the disease rabies. However, animal rights activists consider it an act of extreme cruelty and morally unacceptable because it humiliates those beings. The second aspect against animal experimentation is animal welfare, because there is the possibility of damage that they may suffer in the experiment itself. Animal extinction is an unfortunate consequence of this procedure, for example, almost seven thousand animals die during the experiments in industries in the USA, according to the authority of the Policy of the USA Industry. Despite this, animal abuse is still justified by society and the lack of interest of the authorities and the unconsciousness of the consumers of products tested on these beings contribute to these practices not being eradicated. Whereas, animal rights organizations such as ADPCA (The Association for the Defense and Prevention of Cruelty against Animals) is in opposition to the thought of animal speciesism because in their concepts kill a human being is more seriously wrong than killing animals like rats, mice, chimpanzees, etc. because in their minds animals do not have the same rights that a human does. Nonetheless, this torture on animals continues due to the argues of scientist, they agree that animals are not sentient beings and these experimentative processes with them should be continued, but they do not take into account the pain and torture that they cause to the animals. To conclude, animal testing is a very debatable issue because the majority of the society think on it as a cruel procedure against these living beings.July 18, 202010
- Can you help me to correct it? Please The reading method is a teaching / learning model focused on the reading skill. I am going to talk about some advantages that it develop. To begin, reading method is a recommended to be taught due to this method is an interactive process that learners make use of several sub skills to reach an understanding of written material such as recalling background knowledge, having an aptitude of text schema, lexical and grammatical awareness. Reading method also can be considered one of the most important skills in academic context, and it is considerate useful for all students because it develop gran variety of types of reading strategies that adapts to the needs of each student. Another advantage that it offers us is that it encourages reading by avoiding literal translations in order to develop an idea of independent silent reading and thus increase people's reading speed. Something important to take into account is that in this method the student will be supervised by the teacher, so it means that learners are guided during their process an their motivation and habit od reading will improveJuly 9, 202030
- La vida de PabloLa rutina diaria de Pablo es la misma cada día de entre semana - se despierta a las 6 y navega por Internet durante algún tiempo. Después, se levanta y desayuna con los copos de maíz y el café con leche descafeinado. Luego se cepilla los dientes y se ducha por al menos 20 minutos. Le gusta ducharse así <em>por</em>que tiene tiempo para pensar en los planes del día. Normalmente se pone una camiseta blanca y <s>los</s> pantalones chinos. El trabaja en una oficina, entonces el código de vestimenta no es tan estricto. Su puesto de trabajo está bastante lejos de su casa, pues al principio necesita tomar el autobús y después el tren. A Pablo le encanta leer cuando está en el transporte público, cree que el tiempo es valioso entonces hay que usarlo de manera eficiente. Es una persona muy organizada y amable, que siempre intenta ayudar a los demás y se preocupa por su familia. Tiene una novia que conoció hace 5 años cuando estuvo en París. Se llama Rosa, es una chica francesa que es además bilingüe en español. Pablo se enamoró de ella tan pronto como la vio en una panadería local, poco después Rosa se mudó a Madrid con Pablo y ahora viven juntos en un piso que está en el centro de la ciudad. Todavia no estan casados pero Pablo quiere proponerle matrimonio cuando vayan a París la próxima vez.0 votedJuly 6, 20201

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