can anybody check my story grammar and vocab , so that it can more naturally My grandma and my grandpa were friend since they are young they were neighborhood but they began an officially date when they are 18, and they both married when my grandma was 20 and my granpa 21.and she had 5 child my father is her second child. And day by day she only live her life as a good housewife, and good mother. Before my father was born my grandma ever live hard because of the in 1949 there was a war, and my grandma ran away with a boat the boat sent them to a small island name tanjungpinang , after my father was born and the war already stopped they back to pekanbaru. When my grandma was 46 years old she opened a coffee shop, and not long after this business opening my grandpa wander lived outside and didn’t back for earned money, my grandma grew up her five child by herself for 10year,living on her own earning every single cent by her own hand.after that she came to tanjungpinang for looked my grandpa and lived with my grandpa she never forgot her duty as a housewife serve and take care of her husband, about the coffee shop she left for his younger son. My grandpa built his own business and it was a very success business but only for several years after several years my grandpa’s business bankrupt and their life turn into so much hard , but my grandma still stay beside him and keep gave him support , my grandma doesn’t afraid of hardship . Their life became so much simple,but blissful even that my grandpa didn’t success as once. When my grandpa was 84 he passed away , my grandma didn’t express her sadness she tried to be strong, and now my grandma is living with my parents and and me in tanjungpinang , she let me know that age only a number it doesn’t mean anything even that she almost 87 she still can do a lot of job like gardening and make pop ice or anything else.

can anybody check my grammar and vocab or the way i write ? My grandma and my grandpa were friend since they are young they were neighborhood but they began an officially date when they are 18, and they both married when my grandma was 20 and my granpa 21.and she had 5 child my father is her second child. And day by day she only live her life as a good housewife, and good mother. Before my father was born my grandma ever live hard because of the in 1949 there was a war, and my grandma ran away with a boat the boat sent them to a small island name tanjungpinang , after my father was born and the war already stopped they back to pekanbaru. When my grandma was 46 years old she opened a coffee shop, and not long after this business opening my grandpa wander lived outside and didn’t back for earned money, my grandma grew up her five child by herself for 10year,living on her own earning every single cent by her own hand.after that she came to tanjungpinang for looked my grandpa and lived with my grandpa she never forgot her duty as a housewife serve and take care of her husband, about the coffee shop she left for his younger son. My grandpa built his own business and it was a very success business but only for several years after several years my grandpa’s business bankrupt and their life turn into so much hard , but my grandma still stay beside him and keep gave him support , my grandma doesn’t afraid of hardship . Their life became so much simple,but blissful even that my grandpa didn’t success as once. When my grandpa was 84 he passed away , my grandma didn’t express her sadness she tried to be strong, and now my grandma is living with my parents and and me in tanjungpinang , she let me know that age only a number it doesn’t mean anything even that she almost 87 she still can do a lot of job like gardening and make pop ice or anything else.

I want study abroad i have wanted to study abroad, but got no good financial so im looking for scholarship, im not a smart person my IQ only 124 but if i will hard working in what i interested in, is anybody know some infomation about cambridge or other overseas university that has food science subject

can anybody check my story ? about the way of telling and grammar or vocab My grandma will be 87 in this lunar year 26.12,she is a strong, stubborn, hard working, careful, housewifely,my grandma was born during her mother way to china use boat,she felt the pain when she haven’t reach the destination, but fortunately after few minutes of the pain its she reached and my grandma safely born in her house . her father was working in Pekanbaru,Indonesia as a pig butler and her mother went back to china to gave birth of my grandma because in china still had my grandma’s grandma so that it would be more easier to gives birth if there is relative. After my grandma grew up, in 1886 china and japan had battle war so her mother took her and her brothers sisters to pekanbaru to lived with his father, they wanted to looked for a new life in Indonesia the exact place is pekanbaru. My grandma older brother passed away, becaused of sickness and after that her younger brother also passed away because of sickness , becaused of that reason my grandma’s mother felt desperate and slowly felt ill and passed away when her mother passed away my grandma still in 6 years old. After that only her father who can looked up at her, their life became poorer and poorer, at 6 my grandma can already cooked for her father and helped her father , everyday routinely my grandma woke early to help her father, and everytime she looked at those students who can go study she felt like to go to school too, but because of the family life , she didn’t dare to ask her father,but his brother knew well about my grandma willingness and he gave her some money and asked her to go to the school and registerd by herself my grandma did , and she had a life as a student even she was a student but she never forgot to helped her father as well, she can only enjoy 3 years of being a student not long after her brother passed away and nobody can earn money and helped her school fee so she stopped and back to her life with worked hard everyday helped out her father and earn own money.

my grandma's life story, hvnt finished yet but i need ur help to check my vocab and grammar My grandma will be 87 in this lunar year 26.12,she is a strong, stubborn, hard working, careful, housewifely,my grandma was born during her mother way to china use boat,she felt the pain when she haven’t reach the destination, but fortunately after few minutes of the pain its she reached and my grandma safely born in her house . her father was working in Pekanbaru,Indonesia as a pig butler and her mother went back to china to gave birth of my grandma because in china still had my grandma’s grandma so that it would be more easier to gives birth if there is relative. After my grandma grew up, in 1886 china and japan had battle war so her mother took her and her brothers sisters to pekanbaru to lived with his father, they wanted to looked for a new life in Indonesia the exact place is pekanbaru. My grandma older brother passed away, becaused of sickness and after that her younger brother also passed away because of sickness , becaused of that reason my grandma’s mother felt desperate and slowly felt ill and passed away when her mother passed away my grandma still in 6 years old. After that only her father who can looked up at her, their life became poorer and poorer, at 6 my grandma can already cooked for her father and helped her father , everyday routinely my grandma woke early to help her father, and everytime she looked at those students who can go study she felt like to go to school too, but because of the family life , she didn’t dare to ask her father,but his brother knew well about my grandma willingness and he gave her some money and asked her to go to the school and registerd by herself my grandma did , and she had a life as a student even she was a student but she never forgot to helped her father as well, she can only enjoy 3 years of being a student not long after her brother passed away and nobody can earn money and helped her school fee so she stopped and back to her life with worked hard everyday helped out her father and earn own money.

what is the correct english of slowly fall sick

help anybody can help me to find a chinese fabels ? with 150 words and i hope that the words are easy to read . i hope that somebody can help me ? because im in urgent

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