Please help me correct my article. Thanks a lot!!! In my opinion, three main factors lead to this trend. Firstly, there is an increasingly number of vehicles existing in cities and towns since people tend to accumulate enough wealth to afford private vehicles. At the meantime, the prices of cars decrease significantly and private vehicles are not yet a kind of luxury for most middle Class. Secondly, in these decades, more and more people immigrate to cities and towns from countryside, which definitely lay a heavy burden on public services, traffic included. Finally, there are many cities which were not organized properly-when they were established-with a result that these places become overcrowded

Thanks for your help! the bar chart compares the healthy spending of GDP in five countries in 2002. It is clear that the total health spending in USA is the biggest. It is also noticeable that America is the only nation that the private spending overtake the public spending. In 2002, the percentage of the total health spending was 14% in USA while the figure for japan was only 8%, more than one second of that amount. And the public spending and private spending of USA stood at 10% and 12% of the total respectively. The second biggest country in terms of health spending was Germany. 12% German GDP was spent on health and the number of public spending(9%) was twice bigger than the private(4%). The proportion of French public health spending was nearly 8%-compared with only 2% for private spending-the same as Japan. And the figure for Italy was about 6% and 4% respectively.

please help me correct it. thanks a lot!!! In my opinion, national budget need to be spent on more vital areas. If the development of arts cost governments too much money, other public services may be underfunded, like healthcare, security and infrastructure, all of which are more vital for a nation to function properly. For instance, healthcare play an essential role in the period of COVID-19. Those countries have advanced healthcare system can overcome difficulty quickly and restart economy. Also, arts seem to be luxury, even in the public, in some developing countries. Furthermore, artist are also a kind of profession so they need to earn money by selling works.