My <s>self-introduce</s> (self-introduction) for my<s> interview </s> postgraduate examination interview. Could you help me correct mistakes.

Respected Professors，good morning! I’m very glad to be here for this interview. First let me briefly introduce myself <s>briefly</s>. My name is LiXin and I also have an English name which is Bruce Lee. I’m 29 years old. I come from Dalian, a coastal city of Liaoning province. It’s a beautiful and romantic city in China. I graduated from the fine art department of Changchun Normal University in July, 2006. I hope <s>I could get</s> to have the opportunity to finish my postgraduate course in Northeast Normal University which I have desired to do for a long time. In the past five years, I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination whilst working as a graphic designer in a design company. Now all my hard work has <s>got a result</s> paid off since I have had the chance to be interviewed by you.

Well, in my spare time, I like to play soccer, and play music on the trumpet, especially classic music. I used to be a member of military band in our college. The military band of Changchun Normal University in 2005 shows the National Students Art Competition won first prize of Jilin province.