I’m Chinese. And I hope strengthen my English speaking skills . Can you do me a favor ?

i love my country(China).i living a safe and comfortable life.i have the right to chose what i like to work .and i enjoy health care.although the price of the metropolis estate is so high，i can afford to keep my life at least.And i can eat the delicacy，to have a trip when i get the holiday.meanwhile，our civilian have shown the rally and confidence at coronavirus disaster.and now most people are return to the normal life，that s what i appreciate.

今天的天气比昨天<s>那么</s>好，一整天阳光明媚，哇，真美！散步的路上，可以看到小鸟很开心地飞来飞去，而且阳光穿过树叶，树叶在风中摇曳，看着<s>，让</s>令我觉得气氛好欢乐唷！下午我做了馒头，做<s>到完</s>好了，我们就吃光了，哈哈，太好吃唷！唉呀，我吃太多了，现在我觉得有点不舒服，写完文章，我想要躺<s>起来</s>一下。