1. She was an outdoorsy type with shiny make-up and a horse tail of medium blond hair sticked out at the back of her head. "medium blond hair sticked out" --> "medium blond hair that stuck out" 2. It may be that with experience a person learns to interpret, very rapidly, what he observes, or to draw inferences, or to do something based on deduction or induction from those those observances and his past experience. "observes, or to draw inferences" ----> "observes, to draw inferences" "from those those observances and" ----> "from those observations and" 3. The developmental psychologist Karen Wynn has recently shown that five-months-old babies can do a simple form of mental arithmetic. "psychologist Karen Wynn has" ----> "psychologist, Karen Wynn, has" "five-months-old" ----> "five-month-old" Sorry, I couldn't use colours on this, hope it's not too confusing. Your sentences were really good, with the mistakes only being small :)

The Invisible Gorilla

Tonight, I read the book "The Invisible Gorilla and other ways our intuitions deceive us".(Japanese version)
Do you know the research of in "Invisible Gorilla"?
I had not heard of the research it, but it seems to be very famous. one.
This book is very interesting to me. I found this book very interesting.
Do you have the confidence to notice the Gorilla? <-- Wasn't quite sure about this line, so I took a guess as to your meaning.
Yes? I don't think so.
My brain is always forgets, miatook mistakes, passes up, and so on.
Yesterday, my mother said to me " A wine bottle is over there. Take Bring it to me, please."
I was looking searched for it, but I couldn't find it.
Then my mother said, "where are your eyes? The bottle is front of your face!"
Same Similar things have happened many times, and will happen another day again. haha.
This book explained one of the reasons why my brain would tmake such a mistake!!

Yes, you can use both "nothing much" and "not much" as casual answers to questions such as "what's up". :)