Why I would like to work at home

There <s>are many</s>is much <s>disscuss</s>discussion about which <s>the</s> way <s>are</s>is preferable. Both sides have positive and negative aspects.

I have experience <s>to work </s>working <s>as</s> in an office <s>as</s>as well as at home. When I worked in an office, I spen<s>d</s>t a lot of time on the road to go the the office. <s>Actual</s><s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">l</s><s>y,</s> <s>to get </s> Getting to the office <s>you should spend </s>takes some time even if the office located near<s>ly</s> <s>the</s> your home. The next disadvantage is <s>the</s>that most offices have <s>the</s>a strict schedule<s>, </s> . I must get to office just in time, <s>it's usually nervously</s>which is stressful**(or: "which makes me anxious-->(nervous)")**. Additionally, sometimes**("sometimes" is one word)** work in an office is coupled with distractions <s>for</s>such as conversations with colleagues.

When I am working at home, I have more time for work, <s>withal </s>however, I <s>must have more concetrate</s>have to concentrate more in order to <s>reject distractions</s>prevent being distracted <s>to</s>by home routines. So <s>the</s> working at home is not for all.

Nice work! Really great use of vocabulary especially. Make sure to use indefinite articles (a/an) when necessary such as before "office"--> "an office". One more thing to look at would be nouns in the style of "concentration" or "discussion" (ending in "tion"). A lot of notes I made are just quirks-random features to English speech that sound more natural, and I see you have a lot of that knowledge already. Overall strong writing.

Assignment April 27- The pipeline protest in British Columbia

Hi, everyone!

This is a little essay I did today in my language course. My teacher didn't check it in detail. Hope someone can help me here.

Please ignore the opinions of the topic. (That's not my true thought anyway. :D ) Just for the grammar, usage of words, punctuation and problems about literature. Thank you very much! :)

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Coastal GasLink Pipeline is an important gas route in <s>west</s> Western Canada, which provides <s>the</s> economic benefits not only after it <s>be</s>is finished, but also during <s>the</s>its construction**(benefits to what?)**. <s>What more,</s>Those natural gases will also be <s>sale</s>sold to Asia to be used instead of coal, as <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">it</s> this helps to reduce <s>the carbon-emitting.</s>carbon emissions.

However, this project <s>involves</s>does have some problems such as<s>:</s> violating the territorial rights of indigenous peoples, and even <s>those</s>the benefits which it**(what is "it"?)** claims <s>could bring</s>to have have been suspected**(to be untrue)**. Due to the over-supply of natural gas, the price went down, and the gas companies made an asset write-down, laid off employees, and cut spending. **(to show cause and effect:

"because of this, the gas companies had to make an asset write down")**<s>And, about the right of </s>Additionally, the Wet’suwet’en First Nation<s>, they should be respected on </s>their rights to their unceded land should be respected. **(To transition to this new topic, you can use "as for the Wet’suwet’en First Nation" or "In regards to the Wet'suwet'en First Nation" , either works well)

My <s>sense of in</s>stance**(opinion, position)** on this topic is, **(Better to just say "I agree" or "I disagree" without saying "My opinion is:....")**

I agree <s>to stop</s>that the project of Coastal GasLink pipeline should be stopped. The whole project should be re-investigated <s>between</s>as for the benefits and the damages it could bring. Also, hosting a clear and open negotiation meeting with the Wer’suwet’en people is <s>the</s> obligation of federal government. In a progressive democracy<s> country</s> **(or "democratic country)**like Canada, the voices and needs of its people should be heard and satisfied. **(<--Well said!)**

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Really nicely done! This is actually an interesting topic that I was able to understand easily from reading this. I marked a lot of suggestions because of how advanced this looks. Some things to look at are transition words, stating cause and effect, and one or two tense errors in the first paragraph, but overall super articulate and well said. :)