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    ()内的是修改的内容,时间关系只修改了第一段。我是正在学习英语的人~互帮互助,一起加油~

    国际合作。
    在科幻片,遇到问题的时候全球领导一起保护地球。他们决定一起抗外星人的侵略。(在科幻片中,遇到问题时全球的领导会一起保护地球,决定一起抵抗外星人的侵略)。然而我们现在发现实际并不是这样的。(然而,现在我们发现实际情况并不是这样的)领导错误的时候想责备其他的国家(领导犯错误的时候总想责备其他国家)。




    In sci-fi movies when there are problems the world leaders protect the planet together. They decide to together resist the alien invasion of the planet. However now we see that reality isn’t like this. When the a leader makes a mistake they blame other countries.
    When a tragedy happens it seems we should forget about the little problems we had before. In reality the small problems increase and become big problems. It’s really a pity.
    In everyday life it is the same. When the hero in a film has problems they work hard to solve the problem, they never complain. However in real life when we come up against problems it is easy to lose your temper, easy to lose hope. In a complicated situation it isn’t easy to keep a cool head.
    The present situation is very serious. And it seems the future won’t be easy. One country alone can’t solve such a big problem. We need to find a new attitude, a new point of view. We need to build trust, build new relations. Only in this way can we help each other, solve the problems together.
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    April 26, 2020
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    每个国家都有自己的节日<s>,也有自己</s> 和独特的过节方式,法国也一样。以前(法国的)传统是过 <s>节 </s>基督教的节日。可是,说实话,人们<s>较少</s> (很少)相信耶稣。对于当前的一代来说(对于当代人来说),我们过好多节日。不但有像大革命这样的历史节日,而且(还)有来流行文化的节日。现在(比如),人们也过圣诞节和情人节。在法国,过节的时候,人们又过晚会,又送礼物(人们会聚会和互送礼物)。过节的方式变得越来越让人感动。当然了,超市里人满为患,大家都想买给贵重人的礼物。它是真挚感受的象征。(超市里人满为患,因为人们都想给别人买贵重的礼物。)

    开始的时候,中国跟全外国做进出口。(一开始,中国和全球做进出口贸易。)说实话,在那个时候我不相信中文(会)是流行的语言。<s>可是,之后中国关门。跟中国的进出口很不好。在西方人看来,学中文算不上了有用。</s>之后,中国闭关锁国,西方人更认为,学习中文没什么用处。(再)后来,中国开放(改革开放),<s>当然啦</s>中国经济的进步很快(中国经济快速发展),中国人(也)在全世界旅行。即使学中文<s>是</s>特别难,(现在)在外国学中文的(人)越来越多,(因为这会)对贸易,科学和外交非常有用。

    继续加油吖~棒棒的~
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    April 26, 2020
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