I had long holidays in May, but we can’t go anywhere<s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);"> In</s> during the corona pandemic. At that time, the weather was incredibly beautiful, so I bought a road bike and took a ride around my town. I felt very <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">well</s> good when riding and I got very enthusiastic about it <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">very much</s> after that. I have <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">some other</s> two other reasons for buying a road bike;<s> </s><s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">that’s</s> for my health and to enjoy cycling with my son. I’m really satisfied with my bike and I‘m glad to have bought it <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">as it cost high</s> even though it cost a lot.

I am fond of <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">such kind</s> these types of movies. I feel a strong connection with them. <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">Those </s>The characters take me away <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">at</s> to fairy land. <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">The</s> Only one who has deep imagination<s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">, only they</s> can come up with <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">their creativity</s> these creative characters. Since childhood, <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">animation</s> animated movies <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">entertaining</s> have entertained me. <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">Some time</s> Sometimes I wish that I could also <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">could </s>be a part of <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">those</s> them. These animations excite me, thrill me, amaze me and <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">not what</s> what not. Just because of these movies, I still feel like a child, always happy.

I am fond of these types of movies. I feel a strong connection with them. The characters take me away to fairy land. Only one who has a deep imagination can come up with these creative characters. Since childhood, animated movies have entertained me. Sometimes I wish that I could also be a part of them. These animations excite me, thrill me, amaze me and what not. Just because of these movies, I still feel like a child, always happy.

Nowadays changing jobs in search for better working conditions has become a common practice. People are determined to find a work environment that suits their personality, ambitions, level of energy and many other factors. Incidentally, higher salary is not the most important factor.

To start with, lack of opportunity is among the most crucial reasons why people leave their jobs. The specialists who are eager to prove their high level of expertise and make a difference to the world might be disappointed with monotonous work or little chance for career growth. It is natural for people to want to grow in the sphere they are passionate about, getting higher positions and doing meaningful work. Until their skills and achievements are recognized and taken into consideration, people will leave elsewhere.

Another significant reason is moving to another apartment. Not many workers will sacrifice their time to commute 2-3 hours a day or more. Thus, people usually start looking for a new job in proximity to their homes. In some cases, people set their priorities the other way round and deliberately opt for an apartment that is close to their workplace. However, it is only typical of the employees who are fully satisfied with their job and prefer <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">to</s>  not to change it.

Finally, many people leave their jobs because of the toxic working environment. <s style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">Even</s> despite earning a high salary and receiving bonuses from the company, the overall impression might be brought down due to gossiping, back-stabbing or discrimination against some employees.* Hostile atmosphere at the workplace leads to the loss of morale, stress and frustration. Consequently, even naturally resilient people might start looking for an escape.

To sum up, there are multiple reasons for changing jobs, and employers are not always in control of them. However, it is in their power to provide employees with a humane and adequate working environment for retention purposes.

*Quick note about the following sentence “Despite earning a high salary and receiving bonuses from the company, the overall impression might be brought down due to gossiping, back-stabbing or discrimination against some employees.”

-As a native speaker, this sentence sounds fine, however it does have one grammatical problem. The first clause “Despite earning high salary and receiving bonuses from the company” is a dangling participle because the second clause does not answer <em style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">who</em> is earning a high salary. The second half implies that “the overall impression” is earning a high salary.

-One way to fix this would be to say “Despite earning a high salary, employees might find that their overall impression is still brought down due to gossiping, back-stabbing, or discrimination.” In this case there is no dangling participle because we know <em style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">who</em> is earning a high salary: <em style="color: rgb(46, 117, 182);">the employees.</em>

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The places I want to visit cannot all be written down. However, If I were to pick up some, I would like to go to Laos, Russia and Denmark. First, Laos is colonized by France and I would like to see how much it’s influence remains until now, especially food. Second, Russia. Russia is huge but I would like to go to the place closest to Japan and find out what Russia is like. For me, Russia is one of the most mysterious countries. I cannot imagine what it is like. Finally Denmark. To be honest I would like to explore North Europe countries. I know Denmark has beautiful scenery*, so I want to enjoy it. If you have any suggestions, kindly tell me where I should go.

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I think that modern standard Arabic is very difficult because of the strict grammar and syntax rules. However I think that with some practice spoken Arabic is not as hard. It is fun to try learning different spoken dialects to learn what makes them unique and similar. My favorite Moroccan word is bizaaf (a lot), for Lebanese I like saying baddi (I want), or in Egyptian using azay (how) is interesting.