Not the richer is the happier
Sometimes I think about poor people and I <s>felt</s> feel sad.
<s>Looking</s> Seeing that they don't have access to health insurance, electricity or good (clean is probably the better word) water.
The worst thing is that while they smile and enjoy as much as possible, I get sad and <s>I</s> envy them because I am worried more about the future, the job I don't have, the girlfriend I don't find. (A really good sentence! But, it is very long - it would be best to break it into two sentences at "because")
<s>Do they are</s> Are they only ignorant or <s>they are</s> are they more clever than me?
For that reason, I'm feeling dumb. <s>and</s> I want to change my mind, and focus on <s>focusing in</s> how lucky I am.
You can correct to me and participate too.
(An awesome entry! I corrected some of the grammar errors that I know are wrong, but many of the corrections could go in a different direction depending on the tone of what you want to say. I corrected it to how I would present the sentences - but it's definitely not the only answer!)