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    Max 尜棍儿's notebook entry: May 10, 2011

    It's a nice day today coz the Miami Heats beat Boston Celtics with the score 98-90. I feel so delighted as I am one of the millions of Lebron's fans. King James, Dwyane Wade and Chris Bosh scored 83 points of the total 98 points in this 53-minute game(with one OT). But, only 17 day left for me to compare for the coming IELTS... I just feel a little nervous...

    (I‘m sorry about so many spelling errors...)
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    Max 尜棍儿 A NICE DAY
    It's a nice day today coz the Miami Heats beat Boston Celtics with the score 98-90. I feel so delighted as I am one of the millions of Lebron's fans. King James, Dwyane Wade and Chris Bosh scored 83 points of the total 98 points in this 53-minute game(with one OT). But, oly 17 days left for me to compare for the coming IELTS... I just feel a little nervous...

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    今天<font color="#ff0000">的</font>口试：Today's Oral Presentation

    今天我在我<font color="#ff0000">们</font>的中文教室我们看了我的口试<strike>电影</strike>录像（you meant "video",didn't u? “电影" equals a moive or a film）。我的同学觉<strike>了</strike>得我的<strike>电影<font color="#ff0000">录像</font></strike>很好玩儿（“很好玩儿”用的很地道（authentic））。他们笑了它很多<font color="#ff0000">次</font>！我很高兴，因为我觉得王老师喜欢它。还有，今天我看了我的朋友Emilio。他请我了吃墨西哥菜。墨西哥菜很好吃，但是我不喜欢辣菜<strike>。</strike><font color="#ff0000">，</font>所以我只吃了鸡肉，米饭（“米”always means a grain of rice. ），生菜，<strike>和</strike>幸好，（这里加一个“luckly”表示转折）调味汁不太辣<strike>了</strike>。

    期待你能继续帮我修改我的英文作文，谢谢！
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    Max 尜棍儿's notebook entry: May 10, 2011 It's a nice day today coz the Miami Heats beat Boston Celtics with the score 98-90. I feel so delighted as I am one of the millions of Lebron's fans. King James, Dwyane Wade and Chris Bosh scored 83 points of the total 98 points in this 53-minute game(with one OT). But, oly 17 day left for me to compare for the coming IELTS... I just feel a little nervous...
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    尜棍儿's notebook entry: May 09, 2011 Hi, my language partners. I do need your help. I'm going to take an IELTS eaxm on may the 28th, therefore I have some short essays to be revised. Anyone could help me??? If we can chat with each other online, that would be better. I guess my speaking and writing skills are poor... Thanks~
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    Something I have noticed

    中国人<strike>想</strike>非常喜欢学习，<strike>可是</strike>而美国人却常常太懒惰了！我的美国同学觉得学习<strike>不</strike>没有意思。我不知到到底为什么！（"到底为什么"means“what's the reason at all” ）

    你写的挺好的，很容易让别人明白你的意思，个别细节需要注意点。

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    Oral Presentation 口头报告

    今天我做了我的口头报告。（“要做”means you are going to make. ”做了”means you have done it）我希望我的老师<strike>喜欢的</strike>能够喜欢。星期二我得跟她说中文<strike>跟她</strike>，星期三我有笔试。这让我紧张！
    <strike>今天</strike>天气预报<strike>说了</strike>报导说（Ps:“报导"not"报道"）今天会下雨，所以我<strike>携带</strike>带了我的雨衣。结果没下雨，<strike>可是我等下雨，不用</strike>我的雨衣也没用上！ 今天天气很暖和，外面的景色也很漂亮。
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