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- 今天我一整天都觉得有点累,也许是因为<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">都</s>很忙 “都”means “either” or “all”,I guess you want to express you do many things all the day.you can say“一直” 也许因为一直都很忙今天我一整天都觉得有点累,也许是因为<s>都</s>(一直)很忙,而且需要专心在两个项目。<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">这样总是让我觉得</s>我的身体告诉我"我需要休息一下"(“我的身体告诉我” 包含着身体的感觉,所以你不必再去说“这样总是让我觉得”),没问题,我刚才休息了一下,拿巧克力饼干来吃(拿巧克力饼干吃是属于“休息”的行为,这样说更自然一些),真的好放松哦!下班后,我去阳台上,享受阳光照射在身上(可以说"在身体上"吗?Yes!)暖和的感觉。(underline means the words is good)我很喜欢在大自然中看见(观察 “观察”更自然一些,看见往往表示一瞬间的动作)动物,鸟儿很开心地飞来飞去,猫咪跑得很快,听见嗡嗡的密封(蜜蜂 “密封”是错的,“密封”代表关闭的意思),很有平静(的感觉)!If you have any questions,just ask for that. I am willing to answer for you.0 votedApril 9, 20201
- 电影,颜色,和温哥华1. 昨天,我只看了电影{“只” means only so i think you dont need use "只“,because you cant do only one thing in the same day.}。今天我会做一样 今天我和昨天一样(看了电影)。这是不错 这很不错。横竖(sorry,i cant understand why you use“横竖”,it is wrong in this place),我没有工作。电影很美。要是我不成为工程师,就我会成为电影导演 我就会称为电影导演。一些电影( 让我)很愉快(“愉快” always means pleasant,so “愉快” is about people,so we usually say"一些电影另人愉快/一些电影让我很快乐”)但是,一些电影不很(让我)(很不)愉快。每(个)电影很有趣。2. 我不知道我最喜爱的颜色。可能是绿色。绿色提醒我树叶的树木(we can say that like this" 绿色让我有身临大自然的感觉“)。也许我最喜爱白色。我爱<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">颜色的</s>下雪的颜色。我爱冷的冬天。可能我不最喜爱只个颜色。可能我爱每颜色一样。(sorry,i cant understand the words. It is wrong obviously.you can say that in English. )3. 要是我必须住在新(modern? we usually say“现代的”)城市,就我我就住在温哥华。温哥华在加拿大。 温哥华不太冷。 要是我住在温哥华,就我是附近我附近就是华盛顿州。我的朋友住在华盛顿州。我会乘飞机<s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">为了遇到</s>(去找)他。许久我没有看看他。看看他<s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">是很好</s>(是否还好)。谢谢Green marks means right modification,.Yellow means inappropriate words.Red means wrong absolutely.Could you help me correct my English writing,thanks0 votedApril 8, 20201
- 好久不写个notebook 好久 不/没 写notebook(了)我好久不写个italki notebook。我好久没写notebook我感觉我的中文差一点/有点差,但是我期待可以又开始写 但是我喜欢所以又开始写了/但是我愿意去写, 每个周写一个/篇。请大家帮助我,帮我更正。谢谢The red mark indicates an error. The orange mark represents inappropriate words. The green words are correctCould you help me revise my composition,thanks.0 votedApril 8, 20201
- The senator’s room on a quiet morning On a quiet morning, the sunshine fell into the senator's room. A young lad rides a bicycle and comes to the front of the senate building. There's a big statue of the senator. Interestingly,the limbs of the statue have been destroyed. The lad walks into the senate building. He comes to the supreme level and finds the administration sector. He walks into the senator's room. The senator sit on the chair that has a cushion leisurely. The little lad doesn't draw the direction of senator seemingly. The senator put down the coffee cup on the saucer. He finds the lad. He frowns and says "Hey boy, what are you doing here?" The lad answers sincerely" My family has a bad circumstance. We need help." The senator looks through the statistics of his family, It is minus. That stirs senator's heart. He says"You can go the economic ministry. The economic ministry is in charge of the distribution of charitable fund. They have the charitable foundation. The time becomes static. The sunshine is so warm. The lad thinks. Thanks you for your precious correction.April 7, 2020101

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