Hola! Sería mejor decir "me dijeron que..." o, como dice Luis, "me hicieron pensar que...". En vez de "esta cosa" puedes decir "esto", suena mejor ;) Saludos

Revisions welcome xx Pardon, mais je t'entends à peine, le volume est très bas. Sorry, but I can barely hear you, the volume is too low.

As far as I'm concerned it has been amazing, mainly during the worst pandemic period when we were forced to distance one another. Due to this, in our free time we couldn't hang out or meet our friends personally, so we needed to use the internet to talk with our friends and parents or to meet some new friend online to enjoy his company. Thousands of people made new friendships worldwide and now that everything is coming back to normal they can meet their online friends personally, maybe. Above all is crucial not to feel alone in this world. A good friendship is able to make our lives better! It is a very good text! As general advice, I would try to make shorter sentences. Hope this correction can help you out!