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    June 8, 2011
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    School Assignment (Clothing design)

    第一旗袍是红色的、大(1)、和(2)有黄色的花。那个花费６００元。这很传统的，和在正式的聚会可以穿。
    (1)I don't know,what is your 大 mean, it means 大红色 or  means the clothing is large..
    (2)"和"you must translated from "and",But in chinese,the first sentence should be like this
     "第一件旗袍是红色的，大而且有黄色的话。这件旗袍花费了600元,是很传统的旗袍，可以在正式的聚会穿的。"
    第二衣服是蓝色的、大、和男衣服。 那个花费５００元。这也是传统的，因为这是传统的功夫衣服。你在传统的事件可以穿。

    最后衣服是橙色的、大、和也是男衣服。 那个花费４５０元。这是僧侣衣服，但是我们穿，放松更好。这也是橙色极了，长途能看。

    You can try to modify your second and third sentences.
    I will trace it.
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    April 8, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself hey . my chinese name is Laike and my english name is ilke(I create this name), i study english, because i think it's very useful for me nowaday. whatever in study work and even make friend you have to know how to use english to contact for each other. i'm a software test Engineer，i like play DOTA starcraft 2 and basketball.i'm interested in Magic and Magic too. if you want to go to my city,I am very honored to receive you.
    April 7, 2011
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