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    我和家人在中国饭馆 餐馆。(餐馆 is another expression of饭馆, and I personally find it more natural)

    我的家人要在中国饭 餐馆庆祝新年。(to celebrate = 庆祝, do not miss out the word 庆, if only single word 祝 means to wish someone)

    我弟弟会向我们介绍一下 他的女朋友。 她是一个很漂亮的女生。(topic already suggested that you are with your family, so here you do not need to emphasise [我的 my] every time)
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    祖母太老了, 我们帮助 照顾着她 。(I think you mean to take care of her during the meal here? instead of 帮助 which is like to help her eat) 她不喜欢中国菜,但她也会和我们一起去,不过她会吃俄罗斯菜。
    我们 妈妈还是漂亮的,她不老了女 (Don't quite understand the meaning) 。 我们都爱她。
    我和我 丈夫住的地方离他们很远他们。 这次庆祝活动是一家人相互见面  团聚的好机会。(团聚 is a more accurate term for family reunion as suggested in this sentence)

    谈到我们对食物的喜好,应该提到  共通点就是我们 (since you just used 我们at the front of the sentence, it's better to avoid using again here) 大家都喜欢吃蔬菜,米饭和肉类。 中国食品 菜在这种情况下具有完美的组成可以说是完美的结合。

    对于甜点饭后点心,我们通常吃水果,例如西瓜,苹果。(甜点 usually means dessert only, 饭后点心 means fruit/dessert after meals)

    我们都不喜欢喝酒酒精 - 我们通常喝好咖啡或茶。

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    October 27, 2017
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