Hello Hong; in this evenings lesson, we worked on amending and streamlining your 9- and 5-point report about the on-site meeting with HR in Hong Kong. Then, we chatted about the absence of current riot suppression videos on Facebook. I speculated that the U.S. military had been withdrawn from the city of Washington (D.C.), and that the police forces had been acting with more self-restraint as the riots have settled back into being protests only. The chances of successful censorship of Facebook and YouTube in the United States is almost nil.

Hong; We edited for brevity, clarity, and structure a Word doc that you sent through Skype. ✓

Hello Hong; We worked to amend and streamline your prepared potential telephone dialogue between your friend and an HR representative from the US.

Hello Hong; We edited the text of an elevated HR complaint. A tentative tone and the passive voice are a good idea in a complaint letter: avoid personalizing as much as possible and focus on the behaviours.✅