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Hello. My name is yoneyou. I'm studying English and Chinese. If you need a help with your Japanese, I'm happy to help you.
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    日本語授業

     

    今日、日本語の授業が始まります。

    ( I think it's better to use a comma to make the sentence easy to read when there's a same letter in a row like "日" follows "日" in this case) 

     

    日本語の授業の先生は日本人で、やさしい人です。

    今がっきたくさん勉強するので、つぎの夏日本に行きたいです。

    （するからorするので…the difference of them is I think ”から” is usually used in spoken language so "から" doesnt appear much as a written language. "ので” is usually used in written language. I feel that "ので” is more polite and soft. each of them has subtle nuance that I can't explain well...sorry.)

     

    日本語頑張ってね☆:)

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    August 22, 2012
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    洋服とピザ

     

    今日洋服を洗たくしようと思っています。

    それから（I think それからorその後で is better but 後で is enough to understand:)、スーパーに行って、車のパーツを買おうと思っています。

    また日本人と話せるといいです。

    でも今は私は昨日のピザを食べます！

    ("今は" or "今"…depend on the case thought, in this case I guess ”今は” is better because you talk about "after that" and "and then" here so you can lay stress a little on "Now" using 今”は”.)

     

    日本語頑張って下さい☆:)

     

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    August 16, 2012
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