Just something

Alright then. I just decided to write this because I wan<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">t to</em> practice in colloquial english. In advance, I thank you for corrections.

Recently I watched videos on <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Y</em>ou<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">T</em>ube about walking <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">i</em>n some cities and streets like this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=567&v=VCYLQuiEuqU&feature=emb_logo

I found something relaxing in these videos. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">besides</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">T</em>his videos inspire<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">d</em> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">me on</s> some intresting thoughts. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Just</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">F</em>or example, I thought about <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">how </em>I spent the day and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">how </em>billions of people* spent <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the </em>day <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">with me too</s>. They live their li<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ves</em>. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">but as for matters to us,</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">W</em>e always thin<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">k</em> about our close <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">people</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">relationships </em>and never thin<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">k</em> about <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the </em>billions of people that live their lives worldwide. What <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">are</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">do </em>you think about it?

*alternative verbiage: "<em>...and how </em><em>others</em><em> spent </em><em>their</em><em> day.</em>"

My favorite animals

Hello everyone. <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">T</em>oday, I <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">am </em>writ<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ing</em> about my favorite animals. In the zoo, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">has</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">there are </em>many animals. <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">F</em>or example, <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">t</em>igers, lions, snakes, panda<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>, giraffe<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>, elephant<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">house</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">horses</em>, rabbit<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>, fox<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">es</em>, beaver<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>, alligator<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em> and many <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">other </em>animals.* <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">else live in the forest or in the zoo</s>. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">And the</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">My </em>favorite animal is <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the* </em>horse. The* horse can <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">be </em>black, white or brown. The* horse can be very tall and they can run very fast. They can have <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a </em>mane <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">that </em>is very smooth and beautiful. They are the fastest and gentle<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">st</em> animals. So they are included in the animal races.* They have <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the they have</s> strong horseshoes. It is so cool if you can ride a horse <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">i</em>n a race. It is very fun and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">happy</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">joyful</em>. The horse is my favorite animal<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s>. What is your favorite animal<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s><em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">?</em> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">P</em>lease answer me for next time. Thank you very much for read<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ing</em> my post and fix<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ing</em> it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.

*alternate structure: "<em>There are many animals in a zoo, such as</em><em>: tigers, lions, snakes...</em>"

*alternative: "The" can be replaced with "a" - "<em>My favorite animal is </em><em>a</em><em> horse</em>" or "<em>A</em><em> horse can be...</em>"

*alternative structure: "<em>They are so fast that they</em><em> are included in animal races.</em>"

My First Post

Hi, I'm Benjamin.

I'll be writing different things during <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">sometime</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">this time </em>in order to improve my writing skills <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and</em> tak<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">e</em> advantage of the quarantine too. Please <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">your</s> help <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and </em>correct me.

It's the perfect time to spen<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">d</em> a little more time learning something that I want to. I'd like to learn sign language too. I've <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ever</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">always </em>though<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">t</em> it<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">'s</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">was </em>amazing.

For me, the most difficult thing is to start. Try<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ing</em> to avoid procrastination and deal with myself. On the other hand, I feel fullfilled learning new things and figuring out how the world works.

Regards

The Joker

Todd Phillips <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">have</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">has </em>done a movie that no one <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">wait</s> <em style="color: rgb(0, 71, 178);">expected* </em>from him - a major cinematographic work with the <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">destinity</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">density </em>to live on. <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">The Joker</em> is a work <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">make</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">made </em>with <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">caress</s> <em style="color: rgb(0, 71, 178);">finesse*</em> and respect to the character, filled with remarkable aspects like* photography, use of colors and Bso.

<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">The Joker</em> take<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">like</s> inspiration<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">al</em> comics like <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Batman</em>, <em>The </em><em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">A</em><em>ssas</em><em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em><em>in </em><em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">J</em><em>oke</em> from Alan Moore and seventies movies like <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Taxi Driver</em> or <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">The King of Comedy</em>. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Precisely,</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">T</em>he main character <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in </em>some of <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">this</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">these </em>movies, <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">for instance </em>Robert de Niro, appear<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s> in this movie, in a relevant role.

*alternate phrasing: "...<em>with remarkable aspects </em><em>such as</em>..."

Poems in English

Two days ago, I decided to start writing poems in English. Well, my attempts were unsuccessful. Certainty, I <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">will</em> continue <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to do</s> my new hobby, even if it’s like a nightmare for me. I hope it <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">gonna be</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">gets </em>better...

Note #5: Book review

The book “la guerrilla por Dentro” by Jaime Arenas, was writ<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ten</em> after his former fellow guerrillas killed him. Jaime was a very important student leader in the department of Santander <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and</em> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">who </s>became a member of the guerrilla after that. Through<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">out</em> the book, we can understand the origins and decisions made by the ELN (National Liberation Army), from an internal ex-member <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of it</s>. Jaime did not just write - he could prove with statements from other members, interviews and official papers, his point of view.* When you read this book, it is clear Jaime's compromise with the goal of the guerrilla. The history of ELN is a tragic story that deserves to be known by many people.

*alternative phrasing: "...<em>he could prove his point of view</em><em> using statements from other members, interviews and official papers</em>."

Just writing :)

Hi friends. <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">W</em>here I live, we are in quar<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</em>ntine, so I can't go out of my house. I live in Argentina - where are you from? And how is the situation in your country <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">about the</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">with </em>Coronavirus?*

I'm going to use th<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ese</em> days at home to practice my English. I need to be more fluent<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ly</s> and improve my grammar. I was thinking and I want to write everyday - something different <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and </em>about <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">everything</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">anything.</em> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">because</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">W</em>hen I'm practicing or talking with someone <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">it</em> is so difficult for me to give a fast answer!!! I had been writing this <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">for</em> like 30 minutes <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">h</em>a<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">h</em>a<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">h</em>a!!

I decided to improve my English <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">for</s> this year. It is a goal that I want to get*!!!

Thanks!!!! :)

*alternative phrasing: "<em>How is your country currently handling the Coronavirus situation?</em>"

*alternative verbiage: "<em>achieve</em>"

Am I correct?

It is a controversial issue among <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> society.

<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">The g</em>overnment uses it as a mean<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em> to prevent some people, such as rapist<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s'</em> or murderer<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>, from committing crime<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>. But the death penalty is a cruel act in itself - some people oppose it and regard it as savage action. On the other hand, some people support the death penalty as a punishment in order to decline <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">commit</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">crime </em>rate<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em>.* Above the aforementioned spectacular, it is time to to share my point.

From my point of view, I favor the latter. Where there are people, there <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">would</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">will </em>be crime. Most of us don’t want to live <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> life with danger. When some people pose a serious threat to us, the government should be tak<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ing</em> action. <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">The d</em>eath penalty is effectively combatting against crime because people fear death. Even though it is a cruel action, the people who committing crime* should pay a heavy price for their actions. Our safety thus, <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">at a </em> maximum.* <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">It is</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">There is </em>no denying that some people fear nothing <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">that they</s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and </em>still cause suffering or pain to innocent people. On th<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is</em> basis <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of it</s>, we should reinforce the punishment instead of abolish it <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and </em> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Therefore</s> we can prevent some potential crime from occurring. Life is a gift. In order to live in <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a </em>safe<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ty</s> society, why not use death penalty as a mean<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</em> to protect our life?

*alternative phrasing: "...<em>some people oppose it and regard it as savage action, </em><em>while others</em><em> support the death penalty as a punishment in order to decline </em><em>crime rates</em>."

*alternative phrasing: "...<em>those that commit the crime</em>..."

*alternative phrasing: "...<em>should pay a heavy price for their actions, </em><em>thus providing us with maximum safety</em><em>.</em>"