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hello^^ It has been 7 years since I began to learn English,but writing English,particularly writing essay, is tough for me now. So in this site,I would like to study 5 paragraph essay. Please correct my essay. Of course,you can rely on me about Japanese,and I will fulfill your expectation as I can.
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    making sentences 1 : Feb 23, 2011 It would be risky to go on a road and lie on it. 道路に飛び出して横になるのは危険です。 It is very dangerous to climb a mountain without efficient equipment. 十分な装備なしに山を登るのはとても危険です。 It is really pleasant to read interesting books in a coffee shop. カフェで面白い本を読むのは本当に楽しい。 Most Japanese high school students feel anxious about their future. 日本の高校生の大半は自分たちの将来に不安を抱えている。 While riding trains,most Japanese people are using cellphones or keeping their eyes close. 多くの日本人は、電車に乗っている間、ケータイをいじるか目を閉じている。
    February 22, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself The reason for studying English is preparing for college entrance exam. 5 paragraph essay is essential for me to pass it. It will be done at March 15. So I have to write as many essays as I can.
    February 20, 2011
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