Please Check my Emails

Email 1

Hey!

What a blast having you on board! Welcome, and thank you for joining our newsletter.

I’m Koracick, the CEO of Firebox (we sell cool stuff).

Just a few things you need to know:

1. I won't <s>write you</s> <s>much</s> send you too many emails. <s>(what!?!?)</s> I'm busy and important, you know. <s>;p</s>

2. <s>So,</s> Because <s>you dont see you often</s> we won't see you often, we will make sure you get the coolest and latest stuff from us. (Won't is short for 'will not', keep the future tense the same.)

Now, if you like our recommendations, be sure to check <s>it</s> out on our website and <s>be sure to</s> show your mates. (Be careful not to use too many words.)

That’s it! That is all you need to know! Now you can go on with your day! (Pick either the first phrase or the second one, since they both say the same thing...)

Give us a shout if you need anything!

Much love,

Korasic

Email 2

Hey Rachel,

Welcome to our Clan. We gather<s>ed</s> for our love <s>for</s> of good wine, (heavenly) (delicious) food, and adventures. We can't wait to share these with you. To begin our story, here is a little welcome gift: Use the code below at the checkout for free one-day shipping :

FINO23

<s>At the check out</s><s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s><s> For your first purchase for free one day shipping</s>. We'd like to talk more, but we want you to see what we <s>are</s> stand<s>ing</s> by. Check our stuff here.

Email 3

This is a home-made ice cream, made with love and natural ingredients.

I started the company so I'd have an excuse to spend more time with my best friend.

<s>In the renovated gas station, Burlington Vermont we opened our first ice cream shop.</s> We opened our first ice cream shop in a renovated gas station, in Burlington Vermont. (Pay attention to the order of events here).

<s>Up</s> To this day, I <s>can</s> still feel joy and fulfilment from making <s>a</s> delicious ice cream and running the company with my best friend.

My favourite part of this journey is to bring a smile <s>in</s> to everyone with our Chocolate Fudge Brownie flavor.

I hope we can continue to bring warmth and comfort to our community in the years to come.

Jerry.

Email 4

At Bolland Branch, it starts with better working conditions for farmers, continues with <s>better</s> organic materials and carries through to <s>better</s> final products and customer service (Better is used too many times). And all with the philosophy that our customers and workers deserve <s>better </s>less work exploitation and a more responsible manufacturing process.

That sounds better doesn’t it? (Maybe 'better' is the key word here, but for only two sentences, this could be broken up more and placed 'better' in more spaced out places...)